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7/2/2005 c1 20Ravens Cross
Sorry I have been out of the picture for so long. I have been intending on catching up on my reading and reviewing of your work but you write so quickly I can never keep up! I really enjoyed this piece. It put a smile on my face and reminded me of some of those moments from my past as well. The times of innocence and true happiness. How I long to return to the days when life was simple. Congrats and I shall continue to read more.~Ravens Cross
6/11/2005 c1 142FELICIA-SPENCER
That was so sweet. I loved this. Keep up the great work.
6/11/2005 c1 42gremlin-oompaloompa
hey i thought id check out more fo your poems, lol.

i really like this one, i feel that it portrays all the emotions that one would feel.

also thanks for reviewing my one poem, i am thankful for the helpful pointers, i have been thinking of ways to add onto the poem and move some pieces around, the whole "last day" thing actually refers to my last day at school but i am trying to find a better way of conveying that to the audience. any way thanks for the help i do appreciate it! :D
6/5/2005 c1 account not in use
Hm...I like the (darn it, the word just ran away) almost...the big word people use for happy memories that also seem sad.
6/5/2005 c1 McLane
because those are the best days you'll ever have. very good. That's a favortie.

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