for Scratching Through the Truth6/5/2005 c1 
8Slowly Sinking
Great piece, like the 'warmth is no longer welcome here' bit, very emotive. The questions are effetcive, and the last line's cool; a strong conclusion, but also mysterious. Good piece.
8Slowly SinkingGreat piece, like the 'warmth is no longer welcome here' bit, very emotive. The questions are effetcive, and the last line's cool; a strong conclusion, but also mysterious. Good piece.