for Chemistry6/8/2013 c1 CupcakeLoony
I'd like to know if you've published this story, so I can buy it and read it. I'd appreciate an answer. Thanks.
I'd like to know if you've published this story, so I can buy it and read it. I'd appreciate an answer. Thanks.
9/22/2012 c1 Pseudonym59
This is really good. :) I know you took your stories down - are you going to get them published? If so, will we get updated when it happens?
This is really good. :) I know you took your stories down - are you going to get them published? If so, will we get updated when it happens?
2/2/2011 c1 lynlyn
love it. great 1st chapter.
is there still a way to read this story, even tho you took it down? cause i just recently found this story, and i really want to read it now. any way?
love it. great 1st chapter.
is there still a way to read this story, even tho you took it down? cause i just recently found this story, and i really want to read it now. any way?
8/24/2010 c1 
13youngin-matomon
I liked it. I don't think you're too sappy, or too emotional, or too clichéd, unlike most of the writers I find on this site. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
13youngin-matomonI liked it. I don't think you're too sappy, or too emotional, or too clichéd, unlike most of the writers I find on this site. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
2/12/2010 c1 UNwitty182
I'm glad you are getting your story published... congradulations... when i first read your story i instantly feel in love. because a lot of the emotions that eve go through are very real... especially with how defensive she is somethings... and her high sense of morals that she thinks everyone else have... a well written story... thank you for sharing it with me...
I'm glad you are getting your story published... congradulations... when i first read your story i instantly feel in love. because a lot of the emotions that eve go through are very real... especially with how defensive she is somethings... and her high sense of morals that she thinks everyone else have... a well written story... thank you for sharing it with me...
7/22/2009 c1 1Sputnik Kid
Oh no! You took it down! D: I am completely and utterly devastated! This is one of my favourite stories on . Is. Was. I dunno.
)': I'm shedding virtual tears.
1Sputnik KidOh no! You took it down! D: I am completely and utterly devastated! This is one of my favourite stories on . Is. Was. I dunno.
)': I'm shedding virtual tears.
6/8/2009 c1 WISDOMtree
Aw, man.
After reading your first chapter, I was worried that maybe you were one of the growing number who are taking off their story because of plagiarism, so I checked your profile.
I missed you by one day!
I started reading yesterday and you took off the story the day before =/ I feel like I missed out on a GREAT story. )=
I wish you luck on your future writing (and everything else) endeavors!
Aw, man.
After reading your first chapter, I was worried that maybe you were one of the growing number who are taking off their story because of plagiarism, so I checked your profile.
I missed you by one day!
I started reading yesterday and you took off the story the day before =/ I feel like I missed out on a GREAT story. )=
I wish you luck on your future writing (and everything else) endeavors!
6/3/2009 c4 7adlerose
im a little put off by evelyn at the moment...she was becoming a bit too bitchy for me...she snaps at adam a little too much...i just hope her characterization would explain as to why she acts a little too high and mighty...
7adleroseim a little put off by evelyn at the moment...she was becoming a bit too bitchy for me...she snaps at adam a little too much...i just hope her characterization would explain as to why she acts a little too high and mighty...
6/3/2009 c1 adlerose
awesome first chapter!
the description was so well done that the image fills my mind...the narration's clear as well which i appreciate very much, it was a breath of fresh air from the past five stories i tried to read thru...
definitely something to keep on reading...
awesome first chapter!
the description was so well done that the image fills my mind...the narration's clear as well which i appreciate very much, it was a breath of fresh air from the past five stories i tried to read thru...
definitely something to keep on reading...
5/31/2009 c39 3DarkGoddess3
Really good story and characters. I like that it kept my attention without there being to much drama it made it more realistic. If you ever decieded to write a sequel or some sort of spin-off I would wanna read it.
Really good story and characters. I like that it kept my attention without there being to much drama it made it more realistic. If you ever decieded to write a sequel or some sort of spin-off I would wanna read it.
1/14/2009 c1 intercostalspace
for some reason, i thought initially that Eve was a working girl. i don't know why really. also, i don't think you should address Adam as a "boy," it gives me this feeling that Eve is older than him. m...
for some reason, i thought initially that Eve was a working girl. i don't know why really. also, i don't think you should address Adam as a "boy," it gives me this feeling that Eve is older than him. m...