for The Stepping Machine6/7/2005 c1 
25XtrM
I like how you state everything so matter-o-factly, and although I don't quite understand what happened, the ending was good. Guess you aren't too fond of the stair master are you?
25XtrMI like how you state everything so matter-o-factly, and although I don't quite understand what happened, the ending was good. Guess you aren't too fond of the stair master are you?
6/7/2005 c1 luomupuikko
Well. Whooa.
This story was definitely strange and deserves a review.This was well-written, but as the end came the story seemed to be a little rushed.Don't get me wrong; it was actually very well done. It's just that that I kind of expected more, since the beginning was so fascinating.However, I'll look forward to see more of your works.
Well. Whooa.
This story was definitely strange and deserves a review.This was well-written, but as the end came the story seemed to be a little rushed.Don't get me wrong; it was actually very well done. It's just that that I kind of expected more, since the beginning was so fascinating.However, I'll look forward to see more of your works.
6/7/2005 c1 3a lil black dress
Ha, I really enjoyed this. xD Reminds me of one of those 1940s horror stories you hear about that are passed down in legends. What makes it unique is you took something that Americans obess over (dieting) and just turned it around into a bloodbath.
I'll have to check out your other works. You're very creative.
3a lil black dressHa, I really enjoyed this. xD Reminds me of one of those 1940s horror stories you hear about that are passed down in legends. What makes it unique is you took something that Americans obess over (dieting) and just turned it around into a bloodbath.
I'll have to check out your other works. You're very creative.