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12/20/2005 c1 a
Very well-written. I don't read poetry very often, but I really liked this one. It's to the point and really hits home. I've seen some stuff out there that's open-ended, but I liked the last line of this poem. It ties things up and finishes perfectly.
6/14/2005 c1 38Lost On My Own
very good, the whole thing flows together really well and i love the ideas you give.
6/12/2005 c1 NumblesTheAuthor
oh that was so great and heartfelt! i love it! i especially love the central theme of time-excellent poem! : )
6/12/2005 c1 AmberLOVESyou
MWAHAHAH i love boiz! LOL! omg! I love-ed you piggy i love-ed yoU! gohs i like kyle
6/6/2005 c1 45Wolfgirl1987
I believe we all feel this way sometimes...we all feel ourselves tempted by Satan, though at times we are not aware of it...and we wonder if it really is a waste of time to trust in God...to believe in Him... I really liked this piece...the short choppiness and repetition was a neat effect. Keep on writing for Him!'Much love and God Bless,WOlfie

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