for Walk On By3/23/2007 c11 dee
did you die and go to heaven? its been more than a year and u still haven't updated! i like this story, funny and cute.. hope u update soon
did you die and go to heaven? its been more than a year and u still haven't updated! i like this story, funny and cute.. hope u update soon
8/31/2006 c11 
1BrownEyedBeauty
This is really a great story! I love the humour, and the plot. Can't wait till the next chapter!
1BrownEyedBeautyThis is really a great story! I love the humour, and the plot. Can't wait till the next chapter!
1/24/2006 c11 8squiggle-line
Oh, no! Please don't tell me that's the end!
This is absolutely hilarious. A girl just turned around and stared at me because I was laughing so hard.
Great description of the movie. And the three types of drunks thing was really funny too. Some of the names get mixed up a bit...Mary instead of Marcy.
Please, please, please continue!
8squiggle-lineOh, no! Please don't tell me that's the end!
This is absolutely hilarious. A girl just turned around and stared at me because I was laughing so hard.
Great description of the movie. And the three types of drunks thing was really funny too. Some of the names get mixed up a bit...Mary instead of Marcy.
Please, please, please continue!
1/24/2006 c1 squiggle-line
Hahaha! This is hilarious. "Scuzzy scumbag" Nice use of alliteration. The guy believing that she was an ex-convict was a bit of a stretch, but I guess if he's also tipsy, he would probably believe anything. The pathological liar follow up was a nice touch too.
Hahaha! This is hilarious. "Scuzzy scumbag" Nice use of alliteration. The guy believing that she was an ex-convict was a bit of a stretch, but I guess if he's also tipsy, he would probably believe anything. The pathological liar follow up was a nice touch too.
1/2/2006 c11 1Airirea
Hello.. I read your fic some months ago. But have never bothered to review. Mostly because I have no comment on the story. I feel that it is good the way it is. But now I am wondering if you are going to update. I noticed the stories on you favourite list are all from some months ago too. So I assume you haven't been on FP for quite some times. I hope that you are doing well and that you does not plan on giving up on the story (you didn't sounds like you are going to give up on it) I am just wondering how you are doing. Since you didn't post any news either. Thank you. and good luck with the story and your life
1AirireaHello.. I read your fic some months ago. But have never bothered to review. Mostly because I have no comment on the story. I feel that it is good the way it is. But now I am wondering if you are going to update. I noticed the stories on you favourite list are all from some months ago too. So I assume you haven't been on FP for quite some times. I hope that you are doing well and that you does not plan on giving up on the story (you didn't sounds like you are going to give up on it) I am just wondering how you are doing. Since you didn't post any news either. Thank you. and good luck with the story and your life
9/16/2005 c11 11splotchy
I AM so in love with Zach! He sounds like a great guy to me and I really want to read more about him and Brooke. Update soon. =)
11splotchyI AM so in love with Zach! He sounds like a great guy to me and I really want to read more about him and Brooke. Update soon. =)
8/11/2005 c11 1DuchessYappingDog
Hehehehe. This story is very amusing. She's so stubborn. She kissed the guy and liked it. Of course she likes him! Hahaha.
1DuchessYappingDogHehehehe. This story is very amusing. She's so stubborn. She kissed the guy and liked it. Of course she likes him! Hahaha.
8/1/2005 c11 1SouledChampion
Some more Zach/Brooke moments, soon! By the way, HBP was kick-ass; totally didn't see that ending coming, huh?
1SouledChampionSome more Zach/Brooke moments, soon! By the way, HBP was kick-ass; totally didn't see that ending coming, huh?
7/27/2005 c11 6Renzie
Haha, I loved the "What's it called?" "Shit?" part. Funny. And no, I haven't read the new Harry Potter yet. I've heard hundreds of good things though X_X About it, that is. It's sitting right here - in front of my computer. I think I'll pick it up and start reading...
6RenzieHaha, I loved the "What's it called?" "Shit?" part. Funny. And no, I haven't read the new Harry Potter yet. I've heard hundreds of good things though X_X About it, that is. It's sitting right here - in front of my computer. I think I'll pick it up and start reading...
7/25/2005 c11 Kira
great chapter...can't wait for the next one please update soon!
much love-Kira
great chapter...can't wait for the next one please update soon!
much love-Kira
7/20/2005 c11 4anatidaephobiac
ah harry potter... amazing. she needs to write faster though. i had basically forgotten most of what had happened in the previous books (besides the obvious things) but as soon as i started reading it all came back to me. which was a good thing because i didn't want to waste time rereading the 5th book and just remembering everything while i could be reading the NEW 6th book and being like... wow it just gets more amazing. so anyway, great job on the story... love the characters/dialogue/everything. update before you go away please?
4anatidaephobiacah harry potter... amazing. she needs to write faster though. i had basically forgotten most of what had happened in the previous books (besides the obvious things) but as soon as i started reading it all came back to me. which was a good thing because i didn't want to waste time rereading the 5th book and just remembering everything while i could be reading the NEW 6th book and being like... wow it just gets more amazing. so anyway, great job on the story... love the characters/dialogue/everything. update before you go away please?