for Walk On By7/11/2005 c6 rachel
ok, the summary is what caught my eye, a good summary deserves at least a look, i absolutely can't stand those ( sorry this sucks) summaries. so anyway back to the story, it's good but you could be even more descriptive, it's halirious however so keep it up! and the chapters needs just a bit more... excitment i guess, at least the first couple should to entice. looking forward to updates!
ok, the summary is what caught my eye, a good summary deserves at least a look, i absolutely can't stand those ( sorry this sucks) summaries. so anyway back to the story, it's good but you could be even more descriptive, it's halirious however so keep it up! and the chapters needs just a bit more... excitment i guess, at least the first couple should to entice. looking forward to updates!
7/11/2005 c10 
15Ludor
haha, i love this story! Excellent job! It rocks! I can not wait for the next chapter! This is hilarious! I would have thought there would be more stuff going on at the family reunion, but thats ok. I love your characters, all of 'em! Hope your having fun on your vacations! Hope you update ASAP, please!
15Ludorhaha, i love this story! Excellent job! It rocks! I can not wait for the next chapter! This is hilarious! I would have thought there would be more stuff going on at the family reunion, but thats ok. I love your characters, all of 'em! Hope your having fun on your vacations! Hope you update ASAP, please!
7/11/2005 c10 4anatidaephobiac
sorry about the lack of reviews on my part. i've had a busy summer so i've barely been on the computer... just caught myself up on the last three chapters... you're doing awesome i love the story. got to get back to the busyness now but update soon and i'll eventually read it.
4anatidaephobiacsorry about the lack of reviews on my part. i've had a busy summer so i've barely been on the computer... just caught myself up on the last three chapters... you're doing awesome i love the story. got to get back to the busyness now but update soon and i'll eventually read it.
7/9/2005 c10 Gnat10886
Hey hun!OMG I jumped up an down when I saw that you had updated, and proceeded to bump my foot on my desk, well crush it against it very painfully so. To this I proceeded to yelp in pain, recieve wierd looks from my parents and then actually read the chapter. Which was amazing! Silly silly Brooke being in denial, ack. Gah, have I mentioned I want a Zach? Well I do. UPS him before you leave for vacation. Pretty Please! Heh. Have fun on your trip. I will be sure to have updates waiting for you upon your return.
Nat
Hey hun!OMG I jumped up an down when I saw that you had updated, and proceeded to bump my foot on my desk, well crush it against it very painfully so. To this I proceeded to yelp in pain, recieve wierd looks from my parents and then actually read the chapter. Which was amazing! Silly silly Brooke being in denial, ack. Gah, have I mentioned I want a Zach? Well I do. UPS him before you leave for vacation. Pretty Please! Heh. Have fun on your trip. I will be sure to have updates waiting for you upon your return.
Nat
7/8/2005 c9 Kira
i just started reading your story and i really like it so far...the characters are awesome and the plot is original great job! please update soon!
much love-Kira
i just started reading your story and i really like it so far...the characters are awesome and the plot is original great job! please update soon!
much love-Kira
7/8/2005 c10 1queen-lala
good chapter... oh your going to florida? heads up to tell ya that a hurricane is coming down on saturday night towards monday morning. but anyways, i can't believe that her dad wants her to marry a forty year old dude! eww...lol update soon.
1queen-lalagood chapter... oh your going to florida? heads up to tell ya that a hurricane is coming down on saturday night towards monday morning. but anyways, i can't believe that her dad wants her to marry a forty year old dude! eww...lol update soon.
7/8/2005 c10 1apothecary for lemons
another excellent chapter! her father was a major asshole, i hope they make up in the end. Carmen and Ross are great! Zach and Brooke seem to be so cute together..she reminds me of me..wow scary, please update soon!
1apothecary for lemonsanother excellent chapter! her father was a major asshole, i hope they make up in the end. Carmen and Ross are great! Zach and Brooke seem to be so cute together..she reminds me of me..wow scary, please update soon!
7/8/2005 c10 WildHorses
Omg ... I totally *love* your story. I read all 10 chapters in one sitting, and it's so funny and entertaining. Hope you update soon.
Omg ... I totally *love* your story. I read all 10 chapters in one sitting, and it's so funny and entertaining. Hope you update soon.
7/8/2005 c10 24Isabelle88
FL huh? HUrricane Dennis is a bitch right now, I live in FL so have fun while you're gone and cant wait for the next new ch
this one was great
Isabelle A
24Isabelle88FL huh? HUrricane Dennis is a bitch right now, I live in FL so have fun while you're gone and cant wait for the next new ch
this one was great
Isabelle A
7/8/2005 c10 2Lightning Storm
They got out of the house pretty fast, lol. I love how Carmen and Ross are always on her back about this stuff, its hilarious.
Have fun in Flordia and Europe, I'm glad you're gonna write a new chapter to hold us over until then lol.
2Lightning StormThey got out of the house pretty fast, lol. I love how Carmen and Ross are always on her back about this stuff, its hilarious.
Have fun in Flordia and Europe, I'm glad you're gonna write a new chapter to hold us over until then lol.
7/8/2005 c10 Nessa03
Uh oh,,lol e.. I want them together! they will be cute! hehe! lol.. oh hav e fun in florida and Europe! But don't take to long, there, i want a update! lol...j/k. Have fun thou! ^_^ can't wait till the next chappie! - Nessa
Uh oh,,lol e.. I want them together! they will be cute! hehe! lol.. oh hav e fun in florida and Europe! But don't take to long, there, i want a update! lol...j/k. Have fun thou! ^_^ can't wait till the next chappie! - Nessa
7/3/2005 c9 Eboni
Great story. The character of Brooke is really witty, fun, and intresting. I also like Zach and hope we get to know more about him as well. I like reading the story from Brooke's point of view too. Update soon.
Great story. The character of Brooke is really witty, fun, and intresting. I also like Zach and hope we get to know more about him as well. I like reading the story from Brooke's point of view too. Update soon.
7/2/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
oh thats nice and sarcastic! i like i like. seems like a very promisign start! cant wait to read more. and thanks for your review, i appriciated it. i did update, ch3 should be posted, tho it said u reviewed ch3. tho ch1 was an authors note... so im not sure what one u were reviewing :S lol! but 3 written chapters should be up. i have up to ch16 ready, just awaiting a few more readers to catch on and all. dont wanna post too quickly now ;) anyhoo, im blabing sorry, thanks again!
3Cry Tears of Darknessoh thats nice and sarcastic! i like i like. seems like a very promisign start! cant wait to read more. and thanks for your review, i appriciated it. i did update, ch3 should be posted, tho it said u reviewed ch3. tho ch1 was an authors note... so im not sure what one u were reviewing :S lol! but 3 written chapters should be up. i have up to ch16 ready, just awaiting a few more readers to catch on and all. dont wanna post too quickly now ;) anyhoo, im blabing sorry, thanks again!
7/1/2005 c9 SomethingsAmiss
Yay! that was so cute the way she stood up for Zach. I am SO glad that you made her yell at her father, any women in her right mind would have done that, so thanks for making her stand up for herself!Awesome writing!
Yay! that was so cute the way she stood up for Zach. I am SO glad that you made her yell at her father, any women in her right mind would have done that, so thanks for making her stand up for herself!Awesome writing!
6/30/2005 c9 Nessa03
keep writing~ This chappie, was awsome. i liked it... can't wait till the next chappie!
keep writing~ This chappie, was awsome. i liked it... can't wait till the next chappie!