for Walk On By6/23/2005 c8 Gnat10886
OMG! You are writing again! Imagine my surprise when one day I go to look for your stuff and see it has all dissapeared. Then I burst into tears because it all was so amazing and mourn when you will start up again...AND then I get a sweet little review from you and voila, I have found you again. YAY YAY! This is a super, amazing terrific, stupendous, spiffy, creative, well written, hilarous story. I read it all at once when I was suppose to be working on my own...oops. Heh. I love this to pieces, it is now on my favorites and I am constantly checking back to see if you updated. I can't wait to see what happens next now that feelings are developing. Gah I love, love/hate stories. Keep writing, I'll talk to you soon.
Natalie
OMG! You are writing again! Imagine my surprise when one day I go to look for your stuff and see it has all dissapeared. Then I burst into tears because it all was so amazing and mourn when you will start up again...AND then I get a sweet little review from you and voila, I have found you again. YAY YAY! This is a super, amazing terrific, stupendous, spiffy, creative, well written, hilarous story. I read it all at once when I was suppose to be working on my own...oops. Heh. I love this to pieces, it is now on my favorites and I am constantly checking back to see if you updated. I can't wait to see what happens next now that feelings are developing. Gah I love, love/hate stories. Keep writing, I'll talk to you soon.
Natalie
6/22/2005 c8 Cerin
I liked it. =)
I liked it. =)
6/22/2005 c8 gillybean
Eww, I don't want to meet Jonas. Not unless he is slightly stupid and has grown warts since his days without Brooke...haha, that would be pretty funny. And random. I'll close this by saying: I love Arizona tea too, especially the green tea flavored with plum, and I also adore Zach. Mkay, done.
Eww, I don't want to meet Jonas. Not unless he is slightly stupid and has grown warts since his days without Brooke...haha, that would be pretty funny. And random. I'll close this by saying: I love Arizona tea too, especially the green tea flavored with plum, and I also adore Zach. Mkay, done.
6/22/2005 c8 
2Lightning Storm
Excelent. Zach almost told her how he really felt. I'm an emotional drunk too, so I know all about it. Update soon.
2Lightning StormExcelent. Zach almost told her how he really felt. I'm an emotional drunk too, so I know all about it. Update soon.
6/22/2005 c8 unspokensoul
I love the sarcasm and humor you have in this story. I hope that as Brooke starts to see Zach in a different light, she won't lose her brilliant smart ass tone.
I love the sarcasm and humor you have in this story. I hope that as Brooke starts to see Zach in a different light, she won't lose her brilliant smart ass tone.
6/22/2005 c8 24Isabelle88
Great chapter, I really love reading Brooke and Zach, they are so cute and funny. Jonas next chapter huh? I wonder how that will go, I hope it maybe brings Brooke and Zach closer
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Isabelle A
24Isabelle88Great chapter, I really love reading Brooke and Zach, they are so cute and funny. Jonas next chapter huh? I wonder how that will go, I hope it maybe brings Brooke and Zach closer
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Isabelle A
6/22/2005 c8 11Never Knows Best
Haha! She threw up on his shoes! Man that was funny! And he was just about to confess his undying lovbe for her! (I don't care if that was the case or not, I'll believe what I want to, thank you very much!)Anywho! Great chapter. I missed reviewing the last one (or two?) but anyway! I'm still here and loving it.~Lee
11Never Knows BestHaha! She threw up on his shoes! Man that was funny! And he was just about to confess his undying lovbe for her! (I don't care if that was the case or not, I'll believe what I want to, thank you very much!)Anywho! Great chapter. I missed reviewing the last one (or two?) but anyway! I'm still here and loving it.~Lee
6/22/2005 c8 164darqlyte
This is a really good story. It probably would make a good romantic comedy, better than most, for sure.
You have well developed characters, their personalities are down pat.
Keep writting.
God Bless.
-Darqlyte
164darqlyteThis is a really good story. It probably would make a good romantic comedy, better than most, for sure.
You have well developed characters, their personalities are down pat.
Keep writting.
God Bless.
-Darqlyte
6/21/2005 c8 1stellarr
i'm really liking the story so far. this chapter reminded me a lot of "can you keep a secret" by sophie Kinsella. cute. hope to read more.
1stellarri'm really liking the story so far. this chapter reminded me a lot of "can you keep a secret" by sophie Kinsella. cute. hope to read more.
6/21/2005 c5 Blabbermouth
hey, that part w/ the early bird gets the worm? No offence, but the next line doesn't really make sence. I think it would be funnier if you had her say, "The early bird may get the worm, but the early worm gets eaten" But, hey, you're the author, it's fine, either way. I like your story so far. You're not rushing or drawing out the plot. Nice.
hey, that part w/ the early bird gets the worm? No offence, but the next line doesn't really make sence. I think it would be funnier if you had her say, "The early bird may get the worm, but the early worm gets eaten" But, hey, you're the author, it's fine, either way. I like your story so far. You're not rushing or drawing out the plot. Nice.
6/21/2005 c3 Jessica
XD HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA. *rolls on floor laughing* oh my gosh, that is talent, my friend. *goes on rolling around on the floor*
XD HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA. *rolls on floor laughing* oh my gosh, that is talent, my friend. *goes on rolling around on the floor*
6/21/2005 c8 14Beautiful Destination
This is such a great story so far! I really like Brooke's character...she's kind of like me, with the sarcasm, though I hope that I don't go that far with it. Anyway, please continue writing!
14Beautiful DestinationThis is such a great story so far! I really like Brooke's character...she's kind of like me, with the sarcasm, though I hope that I don't go that far with it. Anyway, please continue writing!
6/21/2005 c8 Kat1989
Haha, that was cute. I want to know what he was about to say (I have a guess, of course, but I know sometimes authors try to trick us readers), so please update soon!
Haha, that was cute. I want to know what he was about to say (I have a guess, of course, but I know sometimes authors try to trick us readers), so please update soon!