for How did the mirror break?8/8/2012 c1 Guest
What exactly is the rhyming scheme? I like the 'plot' and it's a nice twist to Snow White. When I read it, I sort of did it in a somewhat similar way to Eminem's 'MOCKINGBIRD'. Haha! Was that somewhat right? Regardless, it's nice. )
What exactly is the rhyming scheme? I like the 'plot' and it's a nice twist to Snow White. When I read it, I sort of did it in a somewhat similar way to Eminem's 'MOCKINGBIRD'. Haha! Was that somewhat right? Regardless, it's nice. )
11/27/2005 c1 
45Jocelyn Raye
wow rosie...morbid. lol. like i can talk. but very pretty. as you often make things sound. kudos. much love ~raye
45Jocelyn Rayewow rosie...morbid. lol. like i can talk. but very pretty. as you often make things sound. kudos. much love ~raye
6/7/2005 c1 5Fortune of Pen
this poem is so beautiful. i sometimes feel like i am going to explode but i can never get it out. i love the form of your stanzas...unlike some people...*coughstrangerwithnofacecough*
5Fortune of Penthis poem is so beautiful. i sometimes feel like i am going to explode but i can never get it out. i love the form of your stanzas...unlike some people...*coughstrangerwithnofacecough*
6/7/2005 c1 35Strangerwithnoface
Agh, try making it more... as stanzas instead of one words... makes you somehwat confused in what yer reading. Good idea though, really. ~Vlad
35StrangerwithnofaceAgh, try making it more... as stanzas instead of one words... makes you somehwat confused in what yer reading. Good idea though, really. ~Vlad