10/27/2006 c1 26Endless Nightmares
This was a wonderful haiku! If I was in a relationship, I'd want this to happen to me, so me and my partner can live forever. Keep it up!

7/5/2005 c1 52godsandstars
aww..this is sweet. i love this haiku. normally i don't like them but this was really nice. keep writing.

6/10/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
Mm... this begs to be a chorus in a song. Very lovely indeed.

6/8/2005 c1 216ygg
Fantastic imagery! Very fluid and inspiring haiku. Great work!

6/7/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Sweet and passionate.