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10/27/2006 c1 26Endless Nightmares
This was a wonderful haiku! If I was in a relationship, I'd want this to happen to me, so me and my partner can live forever. Keep it up!
10/27/2006 c1 102Terra Fire
Very beautiful, I like it.


7/5/2005 c1 52godsandstars
aww..this is sweet. i love this haiku. normally i don't like them but this was really nice. keep writing.
7/4/2005 c1 63lackluster
sweet and dream-like! i like it! great work.

6/10/2005 c1 deleted-123-45
Mm... this begs to be a chorus in a song. Very lovely indeed.
6/8/2005 c1 87youzi
short. and sweet. Do keep writing. =D
6/8/2005 c1 216ygg
Fantastic imagery! Very fluid and inspiring haiku. Great work!
6/7/2005 c1 612simpleplan13
6/7/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Sweet and passionate.
6/7/2005 c1 Trapped Pianist
"Forever daylight" is a great ending to this haiku. Well done!


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