for Unrequited Love6/9/2005 c1 
36Sita Fuoco
haunting... beautiful... the line "And look at me now: a whispering shard of glass," was very original, very well written... the line "Ghostly echoes whisper like waves gently caressing Scotland’s shores…" remains awfully vivid, and i feel such power from this piece. Nice job explaining that feeling, you did very well... there is nothing that i can see bad about this poem, format fits, grammar good, so keep it up!
~Also... if this is about you, i will tell you that what ever is supposed to happen, will happen... just please, use these dark feelings to write poetry like this one, let it all flow, and dont hurt yourself over a stupid guy who doesnt appreciate you...
Nice job, keep the words coming...
~Sita
36Sita Fuocohaunting... beautiful... the line "And look at me now: a whispering shard of glass," was very original, very well written... the line "Ghostly echoes whisper like waves gently caressing Scotland’s shores…" remains awfully vivid, and i feel such power from this piece. Nice job explaining that feeling, you did very well... there is nothing that i can see bad about this poem, format fits, grammar good, so keep it up!
~Also... if this is about you, i will tell you that what ever is supposed to happen, will happen... just please, use these dark feelings to write poetry like this one, let it all flow, and dont hurt yourself over a stupid guy who doesnt appreciate you...
Nice job, keep the words coming...
~Sita