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8/16/2005 c1 26Veromorphia
I really liked this. The conversion from poem to story to poem again is very interesting and original. The imagery itself was more than worth the read.

And thanks for reviewing my poem, "He Was Gone Before I Met Him," awhile back. You probably don't remember now, but I'm still grateful.

~Veromorphia
6/11/2005 c1 12CineMatik
I loved the imagery - the way you juxtaposed the sunny day outside with a lonely woman crying in her room. Sad story, very moving. The word mort means "dead" in French - amusing choice of names :)
6/9/2005 c1 4Nestalgica
very, very nice. good job, i liked it a lot ^_~

~Max W.~
6/9/2005 c1 2The Lark Ascending
Beautiful sentiments =)

Still didn't get the neighbor thing until too late... might want to think about editing that.

But otherwise it's really very pretty and poignant!

Welcome to fictionpress - this is the kind of review you'll be getting in the future, just so you're warned ;)

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