for Confusing The World7/1/2005 c1 
190Miz E. Mak
Cool form... I see you have gotten in a habit of using the italics! I like that. Its cool to see some deviations from "normal" poetry. Great work.
190Miz E. MakCool form... I see you have gotten in a habit of using the italics! I like that. Its cool to see some deviations from "normal" poetry. Great work.
6/10/2005 c1 90poetic abortion
the lastline just left my heart and body in a puddle of emotion. the poem is amazing, so well done and beautifully conveyed into words. lovely, I love it. beautiful work, I love the word use in it it and how you convey feelings into the mesh is well acheived. keep up the great work!
!~* noelle *~!
90poetic abortionthe lastline just left my heart and body in a puddle of emotion. the poem is amazing, so well done and beautifully conveyed into words. lovely, I love it. beautiful work, I love the word use in it it and how you convey feelings into the mesh is well acheived. keep up the great work!
!~* noelle *~!