for Strongly Weakening7/31/2005 c1 Kayla - dont feel like logging in
hey trisha, this is good...man i half-forgot about this place there for awhile...i cant seem to write very well lately.
anyways, this poem is really good and i know how you feel...all of your poetry is really straightforward, try adding some hidden meanings in anaglogies and stuff...itd be interesting to see.later -kayla
hey trisha, this is good...man i half-forgot about this place there for awhile...i cant seem to write very well lately.
anyways, this poem is really good and i know how you feel...all of your poetry is really straightforward, try adding some hidden meanings in anaglogies and stuff...itd be interesting to see.later -kayla
7/15/2005 c1 
19Kiran S
oh i really liked this one! I have that feelings inside me all the time. The past always seems to stay with me. i wrote a poem about, don't look back, about how the past never leaves you, it's always there by your side. a well written poem! good job!
-kiran
19Kiran Soh i really liked this one! I have that feelings inside me all the time. The past always seems to stay with me. i wrote a poem about, don't look back, about how the past never leaves you, it's always there by your side. a well written poem! good job!
-kiran
6/21/2005 c1 147Eve Angel Lynn
I like this piece, thought a small spelling error, but other than that it was good. The way you ended it made it seem a bit unfinished maybe, but that could just be me. I like your first..hmm...4 lines, it was strong and held feeling throughout the rest of the poem, though short. Still, good job :)
147Eve Angel LynnI like this piece, thought a small spelling error, but other than that it was good. The way you ended it made it seem a bit unfinished maybe, but that could just be me. I like your first..hmm...4 lines, it was strong and held feeling throughout the rest of the poem, though short. Still, good job :)
6/12/2005 c1 1devotedpickel
i think it is really good. you have a way with words!
p.s. thank you so much for reading my poem. it was my first poem ever.
1devotedpickeli think it is really good. you have a way with words!
p.s. thank you so much for reading my poem. it was my first poem ever.