for The Solitarist3/3/2006 c1 
24Sarah-Brighteyes
Hm I love these moments. I am a bit of a busy social loner, if that makes any sense. When I get those moments where I can, "That I can feel myself catching up to me
The one that fell behind,"
I am in ecstacy. Another good piece. Not my favorite of yours, but good none the less. I could relate and I am sure others can as well.
Write on!
24Sarah-BrighteyesHm I love these moments. I am a bit of a busy social loner, if that makes any sense. When I get those moments where I can, "That I can feel myself catching up to me
The one that fell behind,"
I am in ecstacy. Another good piece. Not my favorite of yours, but good none the less. I could relate and I am sure others can as well.
Write on!
11/24/2005 c1 47Luis Iniguez
I like this one, it speaks truly. It's not qute literal enough for me, but it's still great. Well written.
47Luis IniguezI like this one, it speaks truly. It's not qute literal enough for me, but it's still great. Well written.
11/15/2005 c1 141AllyCred
The line i like the best is "No need for lies" well said, i feel the exact same, at first read this poem was kinda confusing, for me anyway, but after another, i found it very deep and giving a deeper message then most would see, great.
Lots of love~AC~
141AllyCredThe line i like the best is "No need for lies" well said, i feel the exact same, at first read this poem was kinda confusing, for me anyway, but after another, i found it very deep and giving a deeper message then most would see, great.
Lots of love~AC~
10/24/2005 c1 43NinjaStoryteller
It feels like it's been years since I've felt inner peace like that. I am the embodiment of hatred, therefore, I don't give myself the best company. This was a really cool, feel good, read. It makes me want to strive harder for a peace of mind.
43NinjaStorytellerIt feels like it's been years since I've felt inner peace like that. I am the embodiment of hatred, therefore, I don't give myself the best company. This was a really cool, feel good, read. It makes me want to strive harder for a peace of mind.
10/16/2005 c1 Eloquent-Marionette
wow, i can freakishly relate to this piece. i love being alone. up in my room. in the dark and silence. its probably one of the best feelings in the world for me. i especially loved the lines "society cannot go into my circle" and "let me be consumed by the silence". i love how i can relate to this so well. great job and keep writing. and thanks for the review BTW.
~davida
wow, i can freakishly relate to this piece. i love being alone. up in my room. in the dark and silence. its probably one of the best feelings in the world for me. i especially loved the lines "society cannot go into my circle" and "let me be consumed by the silence". i love how i can relate to this so well. great job and keep writing. and thanks for the review BTW.
~davida
9/27/2005 c1 219Matthew James Current
I enjoyed this piece. It is abstract, creative, and yet still holds up very nicely as a whole. I'd give a more in depth review but it's 2:30 am. I just wanted to thank you so much for your time in reading and reviewing my work. I never get tired of saying this: people like you make fictionpress a wonderful place to post poetry. Your reviews brightened up a bad week, so again thank you so much for your time. Let me know if there's anything I can do for you.
219Matthew James CurrentI enjoyed this piece. It is abstract, creative, and yet still holds up very nicely as a whole. I'd give a more in depth review but it's 2:30 am. I just wanted to thank you so much for your time in reading and reviewing my work. I never get tired of saying this: people like you make fictionpress a wonderful place to post poetry. Your reviews brightened up a bad week, so again thank you so much for your time. Let me know if there's anything I can do for you.
9/24/2005 c1 183writerforever
This is such a beautiful poem, but also sad. I can relate to the feeling. Good job on this! :)
183writerforeverThis is such a beautiful poem, but also sad. I can relate to the feeling. Good job on this! :)
9/17/2005 c1 23wishingdreamingwaiting
wow, talk about a powerful poem. not only is this personal and honest, but other people can still relate to it. "A void that never goes forward/So I never have to regret the past" while i wouldn't wholeheartedly agree with having nothing to regret, for reasons unnecessary to get into, it's an amazing line, and a wonderfully organized poem! great work!
23wishingdreamingwaitingwow, talk about a powerful poem. not only is this personal and honest, but other people can still relate to it. "A void that never goes forward/So I never have to regret the past" while i wouldn't wholeheartedly agree with having nothing to regret, for reasons unnecessary to get into, it's an amazing line, and a wonderfully organized poem! great work!
7/2/2005 c1 39Kira Deleria
Although I don't understand what's truly happening in the poem at that exact point in time, it still makes me go into awe. I really like this one too and it's very beautiful. I like how the person feels they've finally found themself. Makes me feel a bit better about being alone. Wonderful job, you're one of my favorites :)
39Kira DeleriaAlthough I don't understand what's truly happening in the poem at that exact point in time, it still makes me go into awe. I really like this one too and it's very beautiful. I like how the person feels they've finally found themself. Makes me feel a bit better about being alone. Wonderful job, you're one of my favorites :)