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7/8/2005 c1 63lackluster
i don't know why but this reminds me of a child talking about the unfairness of the world..., it seems very innocent...

~tuesday

Ps- Just because you asked in your review: yes, the nightmare is haunting her when she's older..sort of. thanks by the way!
6/18/2005 c1 4Candy-yum-yum
lol, i liked that last word, rip
6/11/2005 c1 301sirius chatham
That's actually a pretty good poem. Unlike most poems that I wrote when I was 12 (and vastly inexperienced), this poem actually retains a deeper meaning, which is due to the fact that you aren't making up the emotions you are writing about. Great poem.

Sirius Chathamr/r my stuff too :|
6/11/2005 c1 18Karmachanic
WONDERFUL! I like the onematopeoa (now I KNOW I didn't spell that right... Gah!). It makes it so interesting to read as a poem! Lovely work!
6/11/2005 c1 31Passionate Singe
i really like this. in the "words" of one of my poems, "your words bleed honesty" and its true. Everything you have said here is honest and right. I agre with you. you're an amazing writer. keep up the good work! i have you on my faves.

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