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1/24/2006 c2 46inquistrix
CONTINUE IT! It's bloody brilliant!
11/14/2005 c2 1DuchessYappingDog
Oh. Interesting. Hahahaha. I hope he doesn't cheat on his current girl friend. That would be bad.
10/15/2005 c2 Sally-andersonn
The speech fitted the characters well. The settings good and the characters are developed.
8/18/2005 c2 4jetchick18
I really like this. It's funny and it gets you hooked. It's well written. Good job!
6/11/2005 c1 12Little Mermaid
hes in love bc she paid the guy? im sryy im ocnfused by that but otherwise pretty interestedd...

update asap
6/11/2005 c1 lei
Well this is quite good. Some of it is a bit confusing like: what he looks like, what the girl looks like (besides the red hair), how many people live with him, why do they live with them- you know, stuff like that.

I wiil say though that the cynicalness (I don't think that thatis a word but oh well) of the story ads to the character's attitude. The descriptions are good.

You have a story here with great potential. Keep up the good work


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