for Fading Matter, Falling Rain6/12/2005 c1 
87youzi
i like the surreal, dramatic falling of the flowers "like teardrops off her cheek"..do keep writing =D
87youzii like the surreal, dramatic falling of the flowers "like teardrops off her cheek"..do keep writing =D
6/11/2005 c1 16Sha-x-bam
By a conclusion you mean... an explanation? Or something more like how she is now?
16Sha-x-bamBy a conclusion you mean... an explanation? Or something more like how she is now?
6/11/2005 c1 15Kella Trams
I like it but I want it to be longer. I need a little bit more to understand your meaning. The imagery is fantastic and it really makes you think. But I need more of a conclusion I think. Just one or two more lines. That's all I'd want.
15Kella TramsI like it but I want it to be longer. I need a little bit more to understand your meaning. The imagery is fantastic and it really makes you think. But I need more of a conclusion I think. Just one or two more lines. That's all I'd want.