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7/26/2005 c31 
8Coldd -Casee Love.andLies
THE END! You should write an epilogue. It would be great to see what happens between he two.
8Coldd -Casee Love.andLiesTHE END! You should write an epilogue. It would be great to see what happens between he two.
7/26/2005 c31 5jacksy
wow, iv only just read this story today, and i gotta say, brilliant! sequel? ;)dv8ing
5jacksywow, iv only just read this story today, and i gotta say, brilliant! sequel? ;)dv8ing
7/25/2005 c31 8Smittened By Marauders
Aww... 'Finally, she realized what the feeling was. It was hope.' you made it sad at the ending, somehow. Really it's sad that she didn't have the feeling in a long time. Well, love the story. Can't wait to read your other stories!
8Smittened By MaraudersAww... 'Finally, she realized what the feeling was. It was hope.' you made it sad at the ending, somehow. Really it's sad that she didn't have the feeling in a long time. Well, love the story. Can't wait to read your other stories!
7/25/2005 c31 complicated melody
aww, that's the end! omg I can't believe it! aww that was a really sweet ending but I'm just so sad this story is over! I hope you keep writing on here, I look forward to reading more!
aww, that's the end! omg I can't believe it! aww that was a really sweet ending but I'm just so sad this story is over! I hope you keep writing on here, I look forward to reading more!
7/25/2005 c31 youngANDinLOVE
Aw, I like that ending! Oh oh that was sweet! Are you gonna do a sequel or anything? Hah, I loved it so much. Her friends were so cool, and Nick is the best, but I really want to know what happened with Jason... Anyways, hope to see more of your writing!
Aw, I like that ending! Oh oh that was sweet! Are you gonna do a sequel or anything? Hah, I loved it so much. Her friends were so cool, and Nick is the best, but I really want to know what happened with Jason... Anyways, hope to see more of your writing!
7/22/2005 c30 youngANDinLOVE
This chapter was okay. It seemed a bit shorter than the ones before, and it also seemed a bit rushed, like you were a impatient with getting it out. More details about the graduation and the party could've extended the chapter, but still, I like how it's going. Update soon.
This chapter was okay. It seemed a bit shorter than the ones before, and it also seemed a bit rushed, like you were a impatient with getting it out. More details about the graduation and the party could've extended the chapter, but still, I like how it's going. Update soon.
7/22/2005 c30 complicated melody
I'm glad to hear things are settling down but I gotta admit I'm missing those cliffhangers even though I thought they were completely terrible at the time, lol.
I'm glad to hear things are settling down but I gotta admit I'm missing those cliffhangers even though I thought they were completely terrible at the time, lol.
7/19/2005 c29 complicated melody
dang. poor Crystal, that place sounds so lonely. but the girls don't sound too bad, so maybe it won't be as bad as I'm thinkin'. poor Nick though, O wonder how he's taking it? good chapter, can't wait for the next!
dang. poor Crystal, that place sounds so lonely. but the girls don't sound too bad, so maybe it won't be as bad as I'm thinkin'. poor Nick though, O wonder how he's taking it? good chapter, can't wait for the next!
7/19/2005 c29 youngANDinLOVE
Wow, this chapter seemed to go by pretty fast. I like it, though. Maybe in the next chapter we can learn more about how Nick is dealing..? Update soon!
Wow, this chapter seemed to go by pretty fast. I like it, though. Maybe in the next chapter we can learn more about how Nick is dealing..? Update soon!
7/14/2005 c28 Emilea
WAH! i FINISHED REVIEWING EVERY CHAPTER! T_T
fingers sore. lol. neway. overall your story got gradually stronger. really nice work. i hope the ending is strong and not too sappy and fairy-taleish.
neway. maybe you could check out my story. its called Miss Self Sufficient. It's got 9 chapters.
babe anjwl.x
WAH! i FINISHED REVIEWING EVERY CHAPTER! T_T
fingers sore. lol. neway. overall your story got gradually stronger. really nice work. i hope the ending is strong and not too sappy and fairy-taleish.
neway. maybe you could check out my story. its called Miss Self Sufficient. It's got 9 chapters.
babe anjwl.x
7/14/2005 c25 Emilea
She finally knew what the big secret was.
thats funni. all cliffie like.
babe anjwl.x
She finally knew what the big secret was.
thats funni. all cliffie like.
babe anjwl.x