
11/7/2010 c7 Just Alice
I have decided to review and subscribe to this story in the hopes that you continue it, as unlikely as that seems by it's last update date.
I very much like this fiction, and cross my fingers for a continuation.
I have decided to review and subscribe to this story in the hopes that you continue it, as unlikely as that seems by it's last update date.
I very much like this fiction, and cross my fingers for a continuation.
1/29/2010 c7 Nivole
I really like this story. I think it definitly has good potential throughout the story. You have to finish writing this story. It's so good. Adrian and Alex have to get together soon seriuosly they do. SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY AND PLEASE POST SOON! thanks
I really like this story. I think it definitly has good potential throughout the story. You have to finish writing this story. It's so good. Adrian and Alex have to get together soon seriuosly they do. SO PLEASE CONTINUE WITH THIS STORY AND PLEASE POST SOON! thanks
1/20/2010 c7
4Ck90
would it see a night light? Ok very bad joke! The intruder must have been someone who Adrian was familiar with because if he knew where the things were... could it be the butler the brother with some gambling debts to pay to the wrong people, his brothers enemy trying to frame carlos for something, I would love to see the relationship between Alez and Adrian Develop it just seems so explosive!
HAPPY WRITINGS!

would it see a night light? Ok very bad joke! The intruder must have been someone who Adrian was familiar with because if he knew where the things were... could it be the butler the brother with some gambling debts to pay to the wrong people, his brothers enemy trying to frame carlos for something, I would love to see the relationship between Alez and Adrian Develop it just seems so explosive!
HAPPY WRITINGS!
1/20/2010 c7
2dblack50
Well I certainly hope you don't lock this story away forever, whether or not you get many reviews. I think you've created an interesting story so far. There seems to be so much to still discover here, so many unanswered questions that I'm looking forward to reading about. Adrian is an interesting character.

Well I certainly hope you don't lock this story away forever, whether or not you get many reviews. I think you've created an interesting story so far. There seems to be so much to still discover here, so many unanswered questions that I'm looking forward to reading about. Adrian is an interesting character.
1/5/2010 c6 dblack50
I'm glad you decided to pick this back up. Hopefully the inspiration sticks with you to finish it. There's so much I'm curious about with these two characters, so I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress. :-)
I'm glad you decided to pick this back up. Hopefully the inspiration sticks with you to finish it. There's so much I'm curious about with these two characters, so I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress. :-)
1/5/2010 c6
4Ck90
Thank you so much for updating! I was about to jump up and down! I have a question though wasn't alejandros brother called Carlos? I really loved that you updated, and I just wanted to point out that Avon has some pretty hot stuff not as hot as the other.
ANYWHO HAPPY WRITINGS
Thank you so much for the update!

Thank you so much for updating! I was about to jump up and down! I have a question though wasn't alejandros brother called Carlos? I really loved that you updated, and I just wanted to point out that Avon has some pretty hot stuff not as hot as the other.
ANYWHO HAPPY WRITINGS
Thank you so much for the update!
1/3/2010 c5 Ck90
I really wish you would update this story! I was eating my way through the chapters and I am really sad that this one was the last one! It was so much potential! The story just leaves you wanting more, i was sort of sad to see the you hadn't updated in almost three years, I guess that means you won't get back to the story... But I really liked it and felt it right to give a review. really wish you would update!
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
I really wish you would update this story! I was eating my way through the chapters and I am really sad that this one was the last one! It was so much potential! The story just leaves you wanting more, i was sort of sad to see the you hadn't updated in almost three years, I guess that means you won't get back to the story... But I really liked it and felt it right to give a review. really wish you would update!
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!
1/14/2008 c5 meggo
when are you going to update?
when are you going to update?
6/30/2006 c5 meggo
this is so good so far! please keep writing!
this is so good so far! please keep writing!
3/27/2006 c4 i loost speeling beas
i like it so far, dont stop there
i like it so far, dont stop there
3/14/2006 c4 Ayonom
up...date...NOWW!
up...date...NOWW!
2/4/2006 c4 Beautiful Screams of Heartache
Love it.
Don't remember if poppies smell. I should know, it's my state flower & all. :P.
Love it.
Don't remember if poppies smell. I should know, it's my state flower & all. :P.