
6/30/2005 c1 lilsakura
I like your writing style for poems! The repetitiveness adds emphasis, depth, and feeling. It feels like your talking to the reader, or thinking to yourself.
You know, this poem would make a good song! (lol just thought of that)
I like your writing style for poems! The repetitiveness adds emphasis, depth, and feeling. It feels like your talking to the reader, or thinking to yourself.
You know, this poem would make a good song! (lol just thought of that)