for 1 4 32/8/2007 c1 Louise
All your poetry is so emotional and nearly all brings tears to my eyes, I'm very impressed kiddo. Really. This is kind of a overlapping review of all the ones I've read and I gota say you have a talent. Keep it up.
All your poetry is so emotional and nearly all brings tears to my eyes, I'm very impressed kiddo. Really. This is kind of a overlapping review of all the ones I've read and I gota say you have a talent. Keep it up.
3/7/2006 c1 
49Immortal Nyght
This is ingenious. Most love poems are the usual "Romeo, oh Romeo," type of crap, but really, this is original, and though extremely abstract, continues to capture the elements desired in writing this. ALso, the transition between bold and regular allows the two parts of the poem to play off each other, enhancing one another.
49Immortal NyghtThis is ingenious. Most love poems are the usual "Romeo, oh Romeo," type of crap, but really, this is original, and though extremely abstract, continues to capture the elements desired in writing this. ALso, the transition between bold and regular allows the two parts of the poem to play off each other, enhancing one another.
8/17/2005 c1 124in theory
Aw this is touching, fluidly written as well. It seems abstract, perhaps because your language is so unique.
124in theoryAw this is touching, fluidly written as well. It seems abstract, perhaps because your language is so unique.
8/3/2005 c1 270queenvixta
Aw that's really sweet and it's a really original way of writing. Good job! Queenvixta
270queenvixtaAw that's really sweet and it's a really original way of writing. Good job! Queenvixta
7/2/2005 c1 117xHannahx
this is beautiful, a few typos (in side rather than inside) but other than that, i can relate so well. ain't love a marvelous thing? hehe. all the best,
Han.
117xHannahxthis is beautiful, a few typos (in side rather than inside) but other than that, i can relate so well. ain't love a marvelous thing? hehe. all the best,
Han.
6/24/2005 c1 hellokittychic31
aww this is so sweet! i love it...great joB!
glad things worked out for you...
muchLUB-kerr
aww this is so sweet! i love it...great joB!
glad things worked out for you...
muchLUB-kerr
6/22/2005 c1 63lackluster
i thought i had already reviewd this, i guess not, but wow it's amazing! great job!
63lacklusteri thought i had already reviewd this, i guess not, but wow it's amazing! great job!
6/20/2005 c1 17ChloBug
This poem is one of the few good poems of love on this entire site. It's reall, it lifens with emotion. I can FEEL the sheer love you feel for this person. That quality is one of the most important for a poem, you want your reader to be there with you, feel you emotions.
17ChloBugThis poem is one of the few good poems of love on this entire site. It's reall, it lifens with emotion. I can FEEL the sheer love you feel for this person. That quality is one of the most important for a poem, you want your reader to be there with you, feel you emotions.
6/18/2005 c1 174marshbar960
very original here! i especially loved the next-to-the last stanza and the line "Soul entwined for the better". thanks for sharing and keep writing!
174marshbar960very original here! i especially loved the next-to-the last stanza and the line "Soul entwined for the better". thanks for sharing and keep writing!
6/17/2005 c1 3Eskelant
Again... another GREAT poem. I recently added more poems if you want to check mine out.
3EskelantAgain... another GREAT poem. I recently added more poems if you want to check mine out.
6/16/2005 c1 89Lady DreamWriter
wow... I hope that when he reads this, he sees just how much he means to you.
89Lady DreamWriterwow... I hope that when he reads this, he sees just how much he means to you.