for Rainroad Wet6/27/2005 c1 
2Sheila Ibre
I don't get what you meant by the second part of the first stanza. Oh well, poetry was never meant to be understood. Over all, it's a well written poem. You've got a great knack with writing things that have meaning (though i've only read two of your poems)... most people tend to ramble on about nonsensical stuffies (me included)
2Sheila IbreI don't get what you meant by the second part of the first stanza. Oh well, poetry was never meant to be understood. Over all, it's a well written poem. You've got a great knack with writing things that have meaning (though i've only read two of your poems)... most people tend to ramble on about nonsensical stuffies (me included)
6/24/2005 c1 11jaepoe
goow work, i really love the way you used water. my nickname is water at school but in another language...you didn't need to know that.
well done
11jaepoegoow work, i really love the way you used water. my nickname is water at school but in another language...you didn't need to know that.
well done
6/20/2005 c1 Grey Eyed Oblivion
I loved it, you sense the desperation and sadness in the narrative. Good job!
I loved it, you sense the desperation and sadness in the narrative. Good job!
6/17/2005 c1 80citrus scented
beautiful, as always. i feel you not only developing your style , but now getting comfortable with it. touching and tenderly emotional piece, very delicate feelings involved.
80citrus scentedbeautiful, as always. i feel you not only developing your style , but now getting comfortable with it. touching and tenderly emotional piece, very delicate feelings involved.
6/16/2005 c1 7The System Mother
A nice job, good one... as always. ^_^
Oh, the reason I don't write a lot on some of my poetry... is because I like the reader to develop their own assumptions, though "On Piper Street" did mean something deep and dark.
7The System MotherA nice job, good one... as always. ^_^
Oh, the reason I don't write a lot on some of my poetry... is because I like the reader to develop their own assumptions, though "On Piper Street" did mean something deep and dark.
6/15/2005 c1 128ebonyheart
this is a really good poem. short and yet so complex. i like.ps thank you for constantly reviewing my work, i appreciate it. :)
128ebonyheartthis is a really good poem. short and yet so complex. i like.ps thank you for constantly reviewing my work, i appreciate it. :)
6/15/2005 c1 16Dragonitelover
*tear* Sad but good... You write this very well. The italica and no caps really add to the effect. Raindrops have shadows... I would've forgotten that! Awesome poem, keep up the good work!
16Dragonitelover*tear* Sad but good... You write this very well. The italica and no caps really add to the effect. Raindrops have shadows... I would've forgotten that! Awesome poem, keep up the good work!
6/14/2005 c1 ffffffffffffffffffffffff
Wow, I like this. After a while I've come to expect a lot out of your poetry, and you have yet to let me down. Keep up the good work!
Wow, I like this. After a while I've come to expect a lot out of your poetry, and you have yet to let me down. Keep up the good work!