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11/16/2005 c6 Nancy
I really love the way you formatted this poem. I especially love the last lines of every chapter in this poem. Keep writing what your heart and the pen or pencil commands you to. I know this sounds cheesy well, have fun.
6/22/2005 c6 155X.xPrincess.Midnightx.X
Unique format but still very good. Like these poems
6/19/2005 c6 6Nobody-n-Particular
So, are the dragons the spirit within everyone?
6/19/2005 c5 Nobody-n-Particular
I like these lines, "How does a story spread, How does a world begin"
6/19/2005 c4 Nobody-n-Particular
Again like the formatting, but I don't see as much of you in it as I'd like. More I see the rigidity of your formatting although it is cool. Sorry if I'm being a bit contradictory.
6/19/2005 c3 Nobody-n-Particular
This is a splendid basis, but you badly need more details. What is the purpose of your writing this? I wish to know through your words that dance across the page.
6/19/2005 c2 Nobody-n-Particular
I don't feel this answers any of the questions. Oh! I need answers! Please answer! *smiles*
6/19/2005 c1 Nobody-n-Particular
Interesting, perhaps add a bit more detail. Or that might be entailed in the next few chapters which I shall read immediately.
6/19/2005 c6 Stardust
Nice going. Great W's.
6/16/2005 c1 61Stories-have-souls
Lovely start. So mysterious and fantastical...
6/14/2005 c1 Sweetdarts
It's pretty neat, but you should try making the poem longer.

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