for Beautiful10/28/2011 c4 spongy110
Woah this was really good (:
Woah this was really good (:
6/4/2011 c4 XXhomosapienXX
I LOVED ITTT! OMG great story! Detailed yet brief... doesn't make much sense but the important thing is that is was a BEAUTIFUL hahah story.
I LOVED ITTT! OMG great story! Detailed yet brief... doesn't make much sense but the important thing is that is was a BEAUTIFUL hahah story.
5/7/2011 c4 
8urtenshii
:) nope, as much as i wanted to ask you to continue it, i won't :) but i'd like to say it was a fun piece ... light and fun .. i like it :)
keep on writing ! :D
8urtenshii:) nope, as much as i wanted to ask you to continue it, i won't :) but i'd like to say it was a fun piece ... light and fun .. i like it :)
keep on writing ! :D
2/20/2011 c4 Josella
So when I read your author's note about not expecting a sequel, I was SO sure that I wouldn't be happy with the ending, but guess what?
I loved it. The ending's perfect. Good job.
So when I read your author's note about not expecting a sequel, I was SO sure that I wouldn't be happy with the ending, but guess what?
I loved it. The ending's perfect. Good job.
2/4/2011 c4 Warrior-Princess06
'OMG! I LOVE IT! :))
Short but Awesome fic..keep up the good work.! :))
until next time.! :D
'OMG! I LOVE IT! :))
Short but Awesome fic..keep up the good work.! :))
until next time.! :D
11/13/2010 c4 2elma
I LIKED it! Very persuasive skills in getting me to review.
Her character was quite original and it wasn't too cliche. The only problem is that he seems too perfect. But then I remember how annoying he was at the beginning and I know that he isn't. So they'll just balance each other out! And I like that. She wasn't in love with him. But she could be.
Much more realistic. Definitely a fave. :D
2elmaI LIKED it! Very persuasive skills in getting me to review.
Her character was quite original and it wasn't too cliche. The only problem is that he seems too perfect. But then I remember how annoying he was at the beginning and I know that he isn't. So they'll just balance each other out! And I like that. She wasn't in love with him. But she could be.
Much more realistic. Definitely a fave. :D
7/6/2010 c4 2ZackLove
I do like this story.
Just from four chapters you gave the character a life.
She wasnt whiney, and bitchy about her problems.
She had walls.
Like normal people do.
I liked your story.
It was short an simple.
2ZackLoveI do like this story.
Just from four chapters you gave the character a life.
She wasnt whiney, and bitchy about her problems.
She had walls.
Like normal people do.
I liked your story.
It was short an simple.
5/9/2010 c4 imnoangel238
I love this. Beautiful indeed.
I've read this so many times and it still one of my fav here.
Hope u write a new story. =)
I love this. Beautiful indeed.
I've read this so many times and it still one of my fav here.
Hope u write a new story. =)
4/1/2010 c4 Cecily Mitchell
It was very real, I liked it. And that was a wonderful definite ending. :) Beautiful.
It was very real, I liked it. And that was a wonderful definite ending. :) Beautiful.
1/30/2010 c4 xserendipity
i feel like joie just echoed all my thoughts, exactly, on just about everything. hahaha. this was great. i like how it wasn't awfully cliche and i really appreciated the ending.
i feel like joie just echoed all my thoughts, exactly, on just about everything. hahaha. this was great. i like how it wasn't awfully cliche and i really appreciated the ending.