for Pacific Prison11/4/2005 c1 
13Pyreflei
Wow... This is a really powerful poem. I like this one a lot. I love the way you set in the subtle details and make them into metaphors, especially about how the sea held more than his promises. Keep up the good work. We miss you in the band.
13PyrefleiWow... This is a really powerful poem. I like this one a lot. I love the way you set in the subtle details and make them into metaphors, especially about how the sea held more than his promises. Keep up the good work. We miss you in the band.
8/15/2005 c1 56from beneath the bell jar
really good - could totally be a song. First chorus was best
56from beneath the bell jarreally good - could totally be a song. First chorus was best
6/15/2005 c1 91Sagaciouspnay
Oh my gosh this is probably the best so far! Excellent job in this woman's transgression in life...until her very death/murder? For a song like this it sounds more of a story and it's the best written! Going in my faves list!
91SagaciouspnayOh my gosh this is probably the best so far! Excellent job in this woman's transgression in life...until her very death/murder? For a song like this it sounds more of a story and it's the best written! Going in my faves list!
6/15/2005 c1 34MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44
Aw, that is so amazing. It blew me away. You have an amazing vocabulary and you describe emotion welly. Keep writitng.
34MeAgAiNsTtHeMuZic44Aw, that is so amazing. It blew me away. You have an amazing vocabulary and you describe emotion welly. Keep writitng.
6/14/2005 c1 102Joewhatever
Great song. Very lovely wording and imagery. -hugs- I quite enjoyed, very lovely write. Your chorus is especially nice- particularly its last line. I liked everything about this though...
102JoewhateverGreat song. Very lovely wording and imagery. -hugs- I quite enjoyed, very lovely write. Your chorus is especially nice- particularly its last line. I liked everything about this though...