for W R I T I N G3/1/2007 c1 bukangliwayway
"Like water from a waterfall
Words flow from me"
~
let those ideas flow, dear!
uphold the mighty pen (or keyboard) of writing!
let's show the world that poets actually exist!
write more and dominate the world!
oh, and thanks for the reviews :)
(i accidentally posted this review in my page... sorry)
"Like water from a waterfall
Words flow from me"
~
let those ideas flow, dear!
uphold the mighty pen (or keyboard) of writing!
let's show the world that poets actually exist!
write more and dominate the world!
oh, and thanks for the reviews :)
(i accidentally posted this review in my page... sorry)
5/23/2006 c1 
30SaRmelLexia
i like how you put the first 2 lines, cos it is true sometimes the words is just like water from waterfall.Anyway, keep writing!
Lots of Love, Hugs, and Kisses
30SaRmelLexiai like how you put the first 2 lines, cos it is true sometimes the words is just like water from waterfall.Anyway, keep writing!
Lots of Love, Hugs, and Kisses
11/23/2005 c1 27celentia
great poem! i know exactly what you mean! im no good at stories though :( but i love writing poetry, it's one of my blessings! lol
27celentiagreat poem! i know exactly what you mean! im no good at stories though :( but i love writing poetry, it's one of my blessings! lol
8/16/2005 c1 8TheQueenOfSpace
Very nice. I love the waterfall simile, it describes your love for writing very well. Keep writing ^_^!
8TheQueenOfSpaceVery nice. I love the waterfall simile, it describes your love for writing very well. Keep writing ^_^!
6/22/2005 c1 12Anray Jzitusia
wow, that was a great poem, it's like so true for alot of us wrighters, it's just your life, and you love to wrigh=[) great poem, and i'll have to read more!Turtle
P.S.i will, thanks for the r&r, it really did kill me to do that, cause it was based on me and my bro
12Anray Jzitusiawow, that was a great poem, it's like so true for alot of us wrighters, it's just your life, and you love to wrigh=[) great poem, and i'll have to read more!Turtle
P.S.i will, thanks for the r&r, it really did kill me to do that, cause it was based on me and my bro
6/17/2005 c1 242Coping Mechanism
This was really good, I love poems about writing. :). Anyways thanks for all the great reviews, and in response to your comments about the song SEX and the song Total Scum. (A) I had recently slept with a girl I liked alot more who was alot less slutty (B)The song SEX still usually holds true, but not when you're being hit on by an ugly slag who has a boyfriend and already slept with some other guy other than her bf earlier that day. And the girl I actually slept with who was a mutual friend said she slept with like 8 more guys later that week so now I don't feel bad for leaving her at all cause she probably would've raped me and gave me herpes, but I like the song I wrote about it so I posted it anyways. ...So on another note, in response to a comment you made I never get tired of reading reviews, especially when they compliment my work! But who does? Hehe. I got a flood of reviews all at once, I think you were the one who asked me if I'm in a band? I'm not yet but I do play guitar, and as for selling my songs to other people, I am hesitant to do that, as that would be the definition of selling out, lol. However I have considered giving some to a friend of mine for free who is forming a band that really kicks ass,(I've heard them play, they rule!). But to be honest... I would rather wait and keep them for my own band someday, I am trying to form my own band and I have plenty of time since I'm only just turning 19. I've only been playing guitar for a year by my friend in the band says that in a few years I'll probably be better than he is. So within the next couple years I hope to be able to form a stable and original sounding rock band and be the leader of it. But I can't sing so I'll have to take voice lessons also. I've also considered taking piano lessons for some lighter ballads, so I can just as easily scream my head of as I can sit down at a piano and play, that is my goal anyways. And I use fictionpress as a way to get feed back from my lyrics, which has helped me dramatically, I've improved in my lyrics alot. Anyways my AIM sn is DrekonhalaTrilom and my MSN is msg me sometime. or just e-mail me at P.S. How's life in Germany? Can you speak any German?
242Coping MechanismThis was really good, I love poems about writing. :). Anyways thanks for all the great reviews, and in response to your comments about the song SEX and the song Total Scum. (A) I had recently slept with a girl I liked alot more who was alot less slutty (B)The song SEX still usually holds true, but not when you're being hit on by an ugly slag who has a boyfriend and already slept with some other guy other than her bf earlier that day. And the girl I actually slept with who was a mutual friend said she slept with like 8 more guys later that week so now I don't feel bad for leaving her at all cause she probably would've raped me and gave me herpes, but I like the song I wrote about it so I posted it anyways. ...So on another note, in response to a comment you made I never get tired of reading reviews, especially when they compliment my work! But who does? Hehe. I got a flood of reviews all at once, I think you were the one who asked me if I'm in a band? I'm not yet but I do play guitar, and as for selling my songs to other people, I am hesitant to do that, as that would be the definition of selling out, lol. However I have considered giving some to a friend of mine for free who is forming a band that really kicks ass,(I've heard them play, they rule!). But to be honest... I would rather wait and keep them for my own band someday, I am trying to form my own band and I have plenty of time since I'm only just turning 19. I've only been playing guitar for a year by my friend in the band says that in a few years I'll probably be better than he is. So within the next couple years I hope to be able to form a stable and original sounding rock band and be the leader of it. But I can't sing so I'll have to take voice lessons also. I've also considered taking piano lessons for some lighter ballads, so I can just as easily scream my head of as I can sit down at a piano and play, that is my goal anyways. And I use fictionpress as a way to get feed back from my lyrics, which has helped me dramatically, I've improved in my lyrics alot. Anyways my AIM sn is DrekonhalaTrilom and my MSN is msg me sometime. or just e-mail me at P.S. How's life in Germany? Can you speak any German?
6/15/2005 c1 16cynical-dreams
Wow! That sums up my love of writing too! Your rhymes are amazing (how did you come up with the "cogs" line? that is brilliant!). Make sure you keep writing!
16cynical-dreamsWow! That sums up my love of writing too! Your rhymes are amazing (how did you come up with the "cogs" line? that is brilliant!). Make sure you keep writing!
6/15/2005 c1 12myfathersdaughter
I like this poem because it has a light feeling to it and it flows really well.
12myfathersdaughterI like this poem because it has a light feeling to it and it flows really well.
6/15/2005 c1 Winter Reflections
lol i know how u feel. if it wasnt for writing i would be an emotional wreck by now! i love it! the expressions are perfect!
lol i know how u feel. if it wasnt for writing i would be an emotional wreck by now! i love it! the expressions are perfect!