
5/29/2006 c1
12KingdomRain
ohh.. i love the begining. the i have no regrets becuase whats done is done! ah! i love it. my kind of poem is all i can say. keep writing

ohh.. i love the begining. the i have no regrets becuase whats done is done! ah! i love it. my kind of poem is all i can say. keep writing
11/11/2005 c1
30candyaddict
breathtaking and beautiful, I think the rhyming is just perfect. I like the feel, it's simply a gorgeous poem, every line had a huge impact on me.

breathtaking and beautiful, I think the rhyming is just perfect. I like the feel, it's simply a gorgeous poem, every line had a huge impact on me.
8/14/2005 c1
20SilveredScales
Wow... *silver tears stream down my cheeks*that's sweet, as in cool not sugary or sweet... I'm tying myself in knots.It's very kool, even the verse you used in the introduction was beautiful; very rhythmic and just kool!

Wow... *silver tears stream down my cheeks*that's sweet, as in cool not sugary or sweet... I'm tying myself in knots.It's very kool, even the verse you used in the introduction was beautiful; very rhythmic and just kool!
6/30/2005 c1
152drunken-doll
omg I feel the same way about my ex.The first stanza is probably my favorite. I can relate alot to it. I love how you can make the words flow to easily. it's really beautiful. Adding you to my favs.kthanxpeace @

omg I feel the same way about my ex.The first stanza is probably my favorite. I can relate alot to it. I love how you can make the words flow to easily. it's really beautiful. Adding you to my favs.kthanxpeace @
6/27/2005 c1
29Les Yeux Minuit
wow i like this poem it was really touching...great job and nice rhyming schemes...it really flowed and the emotion was very strong...i really like this poem! write more! AMAZING JOB!

wow i like this poem it was really touching...great job and nice rhyming schemes...it really flowed and the emotion was very strong...i really like this poem! write more! AMAZING JOB!
6/16/2005 c1
612simpleplan13
::sigh:: so true.. love hte title too... great poem.. i can definately relate

::sigh:: so true.. love hte title too... great poem.. i can definately relate