for Redux5/4/2006 c1 
41Pelirizado
I really like the emotion you put into your works. You don't hold back, yet you don't try to put something there that's not, you're just honest, and the emotion is real. It's refreshing to read.
41PelirizadoI really like the emotion you put into your works. You don't hold back, yet you don't try to put something there that's not, you're just honest, and the emotion is real. It's refreshing to read.
9/26/2005 c1 Martin Peterson
Very philosophical, a bit sad, the realisation that you've messed up and can't go back. To make rhyming work is a rare skill, and you've made it work here.
Matt
Very philosophical, a bit sad, the realisation that you've messed up and can't go back. To make rhyming work is a rare skill, and you've made it work here.
Matt
8/24/2005 c1 happy HYPER purple penguin
wow, i know this very well! very noice!
wow, i know this very well! very noice!
6/18/2005 c1 22days of rest
Wow... nice poem. Just the kind I like to read, heheh. Oh, and I'm gonna read the rest of your stuff when I get more time, so yea. Feel free to read my other poems and comment on them, I should be writing a couple more sooner or later. Take care!
22days of restWow... nice poem. Just the kind I like to read, heheh. Oh, and I'm gonna read the rest of your stuff when I get more time, so yea. Feel free to read my other poems and comment on them, I should be writing a couple more sooner or later. Take care!
6/15/2005 c1 43RedXfire
ahh i dont get this is it like a brake up or sum very nice job though ryhms are awsome
43RedXfireahh i dont get this is it like a brake up or sum very nice job though ryhms are awsome
6/15/2005 c1 59S0ulSearching
awsome ^_^ I love it, actually...it flows so well and I relate so much...reminds me of me and my crew...keep it up.-pammy-
59S0ulSearchingawsome ^_^ I love it, actually...it flows so well and I relate so much...reminds me of me and my crew...keep it up.-pammy-