for In the Mind of the Contempt8/27/2007 c9 
3PurpleDizziness
Oh, I like this. I want to meet Dan and Ran! And watch Adrian meet Dan and Ran. And learn hot guys name... This is good. The Adrian POV chapter had a slightly different feel, but that may have been because it wasn't full of sarcasm. Update as soon as you can...
3PurpleDizzinessOh, I like this. I want to meet Dan and Ran! And watch Adrian meet Dan and Ran. And learn hot guys name... This is good. The Adrian POV chapter had a slightly different feel, but that may have been because it wasn't full of sarcasm. Update as soon as you can...
11/12/2005 c2 SpidersDiction
Wow! She's determined with the way she said, 'will'. Hmm..I still can't judge your writing but hmm..your style..well, just make the story longer each time, okay?
Wow! She's determined with the way she said, 'will'. Hmm..I still can't judge your writing but hmm..your style..well, just make the story longer each time, okay?
11/12/2005 c1 SpidersDiction
So far so good and there's no way I am turning back! Good intro!
So far so good and there's no way I am turning back! Good intro!
8/15/2005 c8 Katy
I like your story, good work.
Is Adrian actually gonna meet (in person) Aliece's friends anytime soon?
I like your story, good work.
Is Adrian actually gonna meet (in person) Aliece's friends anytime soon?
8/8/2005 c7 chuppachupgirl
Hey, this story soudns really great! I really like it, especially Aliece's character (did i spell that right?) but... who's the guy she ends up with? have we met him yet?
Hey, this story soudns really great! I really like it, especially Aliece's character (did i spell that right?) but... who's the guy she ends up with? have we met him yet?
7/14/2005 c5 7Angel's worst nightmare
please ocntinue and soon. I really liek this story. What's gonna happen next? Any romances?
7Angel's worst nightmareplease ocntinue and soon. I really liek this story. What's gonna happen next? Any romances?
7/14/2005 c4 Deadly-green-snake
hahaha. nice. stepping on the guy's foot. love her sarcasm and this story, keep updating!
hahaha. nice. stepping on the guy's foot. love her sarcasm and this story, keep updating!
7/12/2005 c4 5ScArY rEaLiTy
i like it a lot. i really should give you a more detailed review but, honestly, i'm too damn lazy right now. all i can ask is for you to update soon.
~Scary Reality
5ScArY rEaLiTyi like it a lot. i really should give you a more detailed review but, honestly, i'm too damn lazy right now. all i can ask is for you to update soon.
~Scary Reality
7/11/2005 c4 LifesRemedy
I love it! Very, interesting. I hope you keep writing this.
I love it! Very, interesting. I hope you keep writing this.
6/21/2005 c2 Deadly-green-snake
good beginning...i like aliece's character. how DO you say her name? how would you spell it in phonics?
good beginning...i like aliece's character. how DO you say her name? how would you spell it in phonics?