for Dance on the Glass7/10/2005 c1 
67nevermore the silent cry
wow, that was incredibly sad. i love it. absolutely. i wish i could like, have an interpretation for you, but i've got too many things swirling in my head. the idea is powerful, though. very very sad.
67nevermore the silent crywow, that was incredibly sad. i love it. absolutely. i wish i could like, have an interpretation for you, but i've got too many things swirling in my head. the idea is powerful, though. very very sad.
6/19/2005 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
This is really good, I really like the way it flows. ^_^ I'm really glad you liked my story, thanks for the review, and keep writing! ^_^
54ByFireAndMoonlightThis is really good, I really like the way it flows. ^_^ I'm really glad you liked my story, thanks for the review, and keep writing! ^_^
6/18/2005 c1 19polkadot ladybug
Wow, Em. This is actually one of my favorite poems by you, it's really good, and it has a deeper meaning than just the words themselvs. I guess it could be taken a lot of different ways, depending on who read it. Nice work. :)
19polkadot ladybugWow, Em. This is actually one of my favorite poems by you, it's really good, and it has a deeper meaning than just the words themselvs. I guess it could be taken a lot of different ways, depending on who read it. Nice work. :)
6/17/2005 c1 hahahahahaha
I think your poem is not impactful enough, and you don't evoke images that are sharp enough. Focus more on word choice. "Forget the broken / Whatever it is" sounded like a desperate attempt to fill in lines. Try harder.
I think your poem is not impactful enough, and you don't evoke images that are sharp enough. Focus more on word choice. "Forget the broken / Whatever it is" sounded like a desperate attempt to fill in lines. Try harder.