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7/10/2005 c1 67nevermore the silent cry
wow, that was incredibly sad. i love it. absolutely. i wish i could like, have an interpretation for you, but i've got too many things swirling in my head. the idea is powerful, though. very very sad.
7/8/2005 c1 63lackluster
adorable. i liked this!
6/19/2005 c1 54ByFireAndMoonlight
This is really good, I really like the way it flows. ^_^ I'm really glad you liked my story, thanks for the review, and keep writing! ^_^
6/18/2005 c1 4Candy-yum-yum
cute.
6/18/2005 c1 19polkadot ladybug
Wow, Em. This is actually one of my favorite poems by you, it's really good, and it has a deeper meaning than just the words themselvs. I guess it could be taken a lot of different ways, depending on who read it. Nice work. :)
6/17/2005 c1 hahahahahaha
I think your poem is not impactful enough, and you don't evoke images that are sharp enough. Focus more on word choice. "Forget the broken / Whatever it is" sounded like a desperate attempt to fill in lines. Try harder.

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