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2/28/2010 c1 A Reviewer
It brought tears to my eyes.
8/6/2006 c1 9fj3895y23u8t90ujfasdkui
omfg? This was incredible! So why does your profile say u suck at writing? *sigh* You're way better than I am! Great job!
8/3/2006 c1 YuLian
WOW! This story is very interesting. I really liked it! Sometimes we all wonder where the heck we went wrong...

7/7/2006 c1 22Agent Firefly
I thought I'd reviewed this a long time ago, but I couldn't find one on the reviews page. Anyway, I should have; I've read this story twice before. A lot of grief, a lot of quality, and a very heartbreaking theme. It's sensually disturbing and yet it touches on something that all young girls seem to face-not necessarily to the same degree-that is, wishing to go back and be a little girl again, to restore innocence and to never have been violated by a person, by the media, whatever. It's a very impacting piece; very honest and thought-provoking, well done.
5/7/2006 c1 5Rinote
This is definitely a very poigniant story. It's very sad, but very real. Reality is often harder to portray than fantasy. Good work.
5/6/2006 c1 FuckU
that was so sad. your writing is very unique. i don't it needs any more improvement. it was fantastic
5/2/2006 c1 FormerlyKnownAsKatoka
This story was amazing. The atmosphere seemed so real, and the characters were absolutely believable. I really don't think this can be improved much further, although I have to agree with another reviewer. The italic thoughts do break up the flow. It did cause a certain effect, however, that made the character's regret pretty tangible.
12/31/2005 c1 hey maria
The detail in this is so precise...the scars, the dreary motel room, her regrets. I love the ending as well. Great job.
12/24/2005 c1 6gansta gurl
This is so sad but true! Thanks for the shoutie and the love! Gurl, ur poem fits with the "Am I Ready?" poem! Love ya bunches! Great imagery and excellent contrasting! Wonderful!
10/18/2005 c1 1snowboarder9
great sad one-shot
10/7/2005 c1 6Renzie
Oh my god. This was so good. This had got to be one of the best one-shots I've ever read. I feel really bad for Stephanie, even though this was only one chapter and it's only a story. But wonderful job. Amazing. I really must read more of your works 3
8/16/2005 c1 8Barbados
Well, you do make it difficult to provide CC. I'd say it's gramatically flawless. If there is an error, I'm certain it's not your writing, but a simple typo. As far as what I think, umm, I don't know exactly. This isn't exactly something I can relate to. I do think it's exceptionally well done, I also think it's powerful. Truly you have an impressive amount of skill.
8/15/2005 c1 A.A-H.L
The girl, she threw away her life. Why would she do something like that.
8/10/2005 c1 2Lossefalmiel
woah, did she ever decide what to do about the little girl she used to be?this was very well written, and I did not see a single grammer flaw. great job! btw, I have reposted Darkening Days, with a few of your suggestions, can you tell me what you think?
8/2/2005 c1 17burnisbetter
You did a really good job on this, and the descriptions were amazing, especially the "cancer stick" part. I didn't find any typos or grammar mistakes, and I usualy can, so good job, and keep on writing!
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