for You Had Me At Hello12/2/2005 c1 
21lordelfy
this is very well written..but it confusing me a little..and no u arent weird for writing this
21lordelfythis is very well written..but it confusing me a little..and no u arent weird for writing this
10/31/2005 c1 19Kat-Renee Kittel
This is brilliant. Being able to into the head of a bad character is often really hard to do without being tainted at the same time.
This poem definitely fits the MO of a serial rapist. I watch L&O SVU-you should send Dick Wolf this poem. Wouldn't be something if they actually used it in an SVU episode?
^..^
19Kat-Renee KittelThis is brilliant. Being able to into the head of a bad character is often really hard to do without being tainted at the same time.
This poem definitely fits the MO of a serial rapist. I watch L&O SVU-you should send Dick Wolf this poem. Wouldn't be something if they actually used it in an SVU episode?
^..^
6/19/2005 c1 6Nobody-n-Particular
Excellently written and expressed. Brilliant point-of-view, it is unsettling but that is what I like about it. It depicts a darker side trying to justify itself. I absolutely love this. It is an act of violence, not of love, and for this fiend, pervert to believe so incites such fierce emotions in the reader.
6Nobody-n-ParticularExcellently written and expressed. Brilliant point-of-view, it is unsettling but that is what I like about it. It depicts a darker side trying to justify itself. I absolutely love this. It is an act of violence, not of love, and for this fiend, pervert to believe so incites such fierce emotions in the reader.
6/19/2005 c1 4SerialXLain
Ooh...creepy. I loved it. You are not weird for writing this. You, my dear, are well respected by myself for writing this. (even though calling you my dear might scare you but it's ok...really...) Anyway! Great job!
4SerialXLainOoh...creepy. I loved it. You are not weird for writing this. You, my dear, are well respected by myself for writing this. (even though calling you my dear might scare you but it's ok...really...) Anyway! Great job!