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11/5/2006 c1 Delandred
I thought this was quite powerful and well written, Im normally just a fantasy man, but this caught my eye. I only tried writing a horror, still not sure about how its playing out lol, ill review some more of you stories in a bit.
9/29/2005 c1 11les petits bateaux
Wow...Luke must be pretty jealous. But then again, Riana was cheating with loads of guys in their whole relationship and I guess Luke just can't take it. Anger can control any human being, eh?

Anyways, this is really good. I like the way you described the maliciousness and anger felt by Luke and how the remorse attacked him at the end. This's somehow poignant and I like how you ended it. Bravo!

~~Trinity

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