for Just Let us BE3/6/2007 c1 
136LilLaTLuv
Hey!
Okay, that is adorable. Very real feeling. So, if these are your not-so-good works, I'd love to see your good ones!
Luv ya,
Tashi :)
136LilLaTLuvHey!
Okay, that is adorable. Very real feeling. So, if these are your not-so-good works, I'd love to see your good ones!
Luv ya,
Tashi :)
6/30/2005 c1 lilsakura
Another poem that woudl make a good song! I would change is the placing of the line "The only thing on the menu I crave is you" I would suggest trying to fit it in after you talk about dinner dates. How about having "The only thing on the menu I crave is you" swap places with "Those are the things that I need." (and change "those are..." to "those aren't..."Other than that, good!
Another poem that woudl make a good song! I would change is the placing of the line "The only thing on the menu I crave is you" I would suggest trying to fit it in after you talk about dinner dates. How about having "The only thing on the menu I crave is you" swap places with "Those are the things that I need." (and change "those are..." to "those aren't..."Other than that, good!