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3/6/2007 c1 136LilLaTLuv
Hey!

Okay, that is adorable. Very real feeling. So, if these are your not-so-good works, I'd love to see your good ones!

Luv ya,

Tashi :)
6/30/2005 c1 lilsakura
Another poem that woudl make a good song! I would change is the placing of the line "The only thing on the menu I crave is you" I would suggest trying to fit it in after you talk about dinner dates. How about having "The only thing on the menu I crave is you" swap places with "Those are the things that I need." (and change "those are..." to "those aren't..."Other than that, good!
6/19/2005 c1 43A Work In Progress
Wow i wonder if my girlfriend feels the same way?

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