for Homesick Abortion6/20/2005 c1 ETG
Heehee... he's evil... i like it! more please:)
Heehee... he's evil... i like it! more please:)
6/20/2005 c1 
73An Inside Joke
Your narrator came off as a jerk right from the start of this piece, which made it really difficult for me as the reader to sympathise with him or care about him.
73An Inside JokeYour narrator came off as a jerk right from the start of this piece, which made it really difficult for me as the reader to sympathise with him or care about him.