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1/17/2007 c1

83Adonia Chesser
I liked the interesting point of view you had on raw human emotions. Good Job.

9/8/2006 c1

1Mother Nature's Daughter
hmm interesting...but i like it. yea, i like it a lot

11/17/2005 c1

39The Aud One
oh... that was depressing. but in a good way. *can depressing be good?* uh... *(shakes head) idiot... sorry for my other me. she can be a bit stupid sometimes.* hey i heard that *anyways she likes the poem*

8/17/2005 c1

20Infection
very interesting...

8/14/2005 c1

1Infinite Abyss
Great poem.

7/18/2005 c1 waitandhope
That was deep...and powerful. Well done.

6/26/2005 c1

9Jane Precious
wow, that's um, deep, and dark. But excellent. Nice poem. ^-^

6/23/2005 c1

28these travels
thanks for your review.

i liked this.a lot.

6/23/2005 c1 SnoWhiteQueen
Great poem!

6/22/2005 c1

7Bitter.Sweet.Endings
great!

thanks for the review! I wrote a new poem in the same thing (chapter 2-ih type thing) so ya. THANKS AGIAN!

6/21/2005 c1

612simpleplan13
i love the ending.. i can totally relate.. great job & thanks for all your reviews!

6/20/2005 c1

1Vagrance
Good rhythm and well formated to give a sense of falling. I like the angst in the story.

6/20/2005 c1 colorguardgeek
Wow. Great imagery, good job.

6/20/2005 c1

126swift sky silver
i can feel the emotion put in to this piece. nicely done =0)