
8/23/2005 c1 Vent
Yeah, a lot of people write stuff like this every day. Honestly, I get sick of reading it. People have no problem whining and complaining but no one does anything about it.
All MY whining aside, I really like your style. Bitterly honest. I love it. Hippie with edge. (that IS compliment believe it or not) great job.
Yeah, a lot of people write stuff like this every day. Honestly, I get sick of reading it. People have no problem whining and complaining but no one does anything about it.
All MY whining aside, I really like your style. Bitterly honest. I love it. Hippie with edge. (that IS compliment believe it or not) great job.
7/29/2005 c1 Soul of Night
Ok on a serious note...i say 'indeed' on a slightly other note i'd say 'yeah stick it to the man! F* it' but yeah i can see what your talking about. I sure wouldnt wanna be in THAT world you speak of...otherwise i would probably be insane.
Ok on a serious note...i say 'indeed' on a slightly other note i'd say 'yeah stick it to the man! F* it' but yeah i can see what your talking about. I sure wouldnt wanna be in THAT world you speak of...otherwise i would probably be insane.
6/21/2005 c1
9QuillKitten
Fuck you very much. I can't think of anything more depressing than social commentary except maybe the fac that most of it, if not all, is true. It's rather sickening when all this is going on and then you hear people beligerantly forcing ignorance or not well, giving a flying fuck. You are quite liberal with the word 'fuck' I've noticed reading your works. It's all great stuff, but sometimes, knowing your intelligence, you might have fun with some word play. I don't know, everything you write is so intensly emotional and raw. Like a window into your heart or soul maybe. And my favorite line (well one of them):"Where we hand out drugs to kids and tell them to shut the fuck up and sit the fuck down."

Fuck you very much. I can't think of anything more depressing than social commentary except maybe the fac that most of it, if not all, is true. It's rather sickening when all this is going on and then you hear people beligerantly forcing ignorance or not well, giving a flying fuck. You are quite liberal with the word 'fuck' I've noticed reading your works. It's all great stuff, but sometimes, knowing your intelligence, you might have fun with some word play. I don't know, everything you write is so intensly emotional and raw. Like a window into your heart or soul maybe. And my favorite line (well one of them):"Where we hand out drugs to kids and tell them to shut the fuck up and sit the fuck down."
6/21/2005 c1
28TinuvielDork
Wow. This is so filled with raw emotion. Not quite the type of poems I usually like, but it's good.

Wow. This is so filled with raw emotion. Not quite the type of poems I usually like, but it's good.
6/21/2005 c1 vague shadow
Wow, very intense and powerful. I can tell that you were extremely pissed off when you wrote this. ^_^
Great job!
~CR
Wow, very intense and powerful. I can tell that you were extremely pissed off when you wrote this. ^_^
Great job!
~CR
6/21/2005 c1 Ashley
Prity mint as i rekon,keep it up and u'll be famous
Prity mint as i rekon,keep it up and u'll be famous