for The Excuse7/4/2005 c1 
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dorin, this poem is so great. you're like Dr. Suess! i love the rhyming, and the story was really cute. this was a really fun poem.
30amc623dorin, this poem is so great. you're like Dr. Suess! i love the rhyming, and the story was really cute. this was a really fun poem.
6/24/2005 c1 1Chasmal
hey, dor, it's janessa! haha, great poem, i love it! i was laughing the whole time. write another one PLEASE?
1Chasmalhey, dor, it's janessa! haha, great poem, i love it! i was laughing the whole time. write another one PLEASE?
6/22/2005 c1 2The Alien from Uranus
Very entertaining and very well written. Go you! The meter was almost perfect, and the rhyming had me charmed. The story behind "the excuse" was also very clever.
~Straight from Uranus~
2The Alien from UranusVery entertaining and very well written. Go you! The meter was almost perfect, and the rhyming had me charmed. The story behind "the excuse" was also very clever.
~Straight from Uranus~
6/21/2005 c1 1Kaggy
that was funny... it would make a realy cute kids book, with pictires and bright colors!
I loved your descriptive words, but it was kind of hard to read cuz it was so long (well not realy, but for a long time I ouldn't see where you where going with the plot)
But regardless i still raly liked it
(sorry about my spelling... I'm dyslexic so even though I am 17 it's a struggel to spell anything correctly!)
1Kaggythat was funny... it would make a realy cute kids book, with pictires and bright colors!
I loved your descriptive words, but it was kind of hard to read cuz it was so long (well not realy, but for a long time I ouldn't see where you where going with the plot)
But regardless i still raly liked it
(sorry about my spelling... I'm dyslexic so even though I am 17 it's a struggel to spell anything correctly!)
6/21/2005 c1 7TigHan
oh my goodness. this is amazing! you are truly talented. this poem is so funny, tells a story, AND rhymes, which is amazing and i most definitely can't do. i'm mightily impressed. good job!
if you have a minute would you mind reviewing my story paths of destiny? i would love to have your input! thanks!
7TigHanoh my goodness. this is amazing! you are truly talented. this poem is so funny, tells a story, AND rhymes, which is amazing and i most definitely can't do. i'm mightily impressed. good job!
if you have a minute would you mind reviewing my story paths of destiny? i would love to have your input! thanks!
6/21/2005 c1 Story-Teller's Aide
hehe, i enjoyed this :P It seemed very professional at times. Near the beginning you could improve the flow by the adding a few syllables here and there, but as a whole I really liked it
hehe, i enjoyed this :P It seemed very professional at times. Near the beginning you could improve the flow by the adding a few syllables here and there, but as a whole I really liked it