for The Blue Sun6/11/2008 c1 
14Illegal0Immoral
I feel incredibly dumb right now but I have absolutely no clue what just happened. *So confused :( * So yeah I'ma go check out the other reviews to see if they can help me.
14Illegal0ImmoralI feel incredibly dumb right now but I have absolutely no clue what just happened. *So confused :( * So yeah I'ma go check out the other reviews to see if they can help me.
10/13/2007 c1 31freakyAngel
Lol.
And they were actually stupid enough not to notice the blue curtains beforehand?
Anyways, so didn't expect that part. And the intrigue about the blue sun got me going.
Very nice. Don't stop writing! :)
31freakyAngelLol.
And they were actually stupid enough not to notice the blue curtains beforehand?
Anyways, so didn't expect that part. And the intrigue about the blue sun got me going.
Very nice. Don't stop writing! :)
8/20/2007 c1 7thepiemaster
wow, is this the only story you have that doesn't have any death in it? I remember reading something like that in Edge 8. I like this story, somewhat random but it really makes you think, if the sun turned blue could you be normal like Natalie or would you be wtf like Teret?
7thepiemasterwow, is this the only story you have that doesn't have any death in it? I remember reading something like that in Edge 8. I like this story, somewhat random but it really makes you think, if the sun turned blue could you be normal like Natalie or would you be wtf like Teret?
5/2/2007 c1 31emptyword
Oh I adore it. Not an extraordinarily unique concept, but a solid, trustworthy one, and very well-written. The dialogue delivers the impact. Very nice.
31emptywordOh I adore it. Not an extraordinarily unique concept, but a solid, trustworthy one, and very well-written. The dialogue delivers the impact. Very nice.
6/28/2006 c1 3Zigsz
I really enjoy your writings... They tend to make you think, and that means you are a very skilled writer. Keep On!
3ZigszI really enjoy your writings... They tend to make you think, and that means you are a very skilled writer. Keep On!
6/12/2006 c1 you're so postmodern
Makes you think a bit about what Teret says. Nicely written and interesting perspective Teret has.
Makes you think a bit about what Teret says. Nicely written and interesting perspective Teret has.
4/21/2006 c1 2akaCHEEKS
i didn't get it... hhaa.. sorry... it was just soo confusing.. i mean.. what... was he like the person who changed the color of the sun... and yeah... it was confusing... i'm pretty slow... so don't mind me...
2akaCHEEKSi didn't get it... hhaa.. sorry... it was just soo confusing.. i mean.. what... was he like the person who changed the color of the sun... and yeah... it was confusing... i'm pretty slow... so don't mind me...
4/9/2006 c1 hammielurv
wow, this story is so great. it's really...unexpected? but i still LURV it. write more long stories, PLEASE, and finish the natural born. i love that story.
wow, this story is so great. it's really...unexpected? but i still LURV it. write more long stories, PLEASE, and finish the natural born. i love that story.