6/23/2005 c1 156ShadowPharoh
wow. powerful choice of words. fantastic job. you are an amazing poet!
SP
wow. powerful choice of words. fantastic job. you are an amazing poet!
SP
6/23/2005 c1 31bjw
Wow. Your poem's good. The way you write is very thought-provoking. Though I'm still trying to understand what exactly indigo flavour did.. it's an excellent piece. The ending was succinct but powerful, and it suited the poem beautifully. Kudos!
Wow. Your poem's good. The way you write is very thought-provoking. Though I'm still trying to understand what exactly indigo flavour did.. it's an excellent piece. The ending was succinct but powerful, and it suited the poem beautifully. Kudos!
6/23/2005 c1 27GC Age
Very good!(8 out of 10)on my scale.This rating is very rare for me. I liked it mostly becuase you did what i tell most people here to do. Wrote with your heart! And truly you did it well for i fell into thine own blood(sorry i could not reist).
I will go see some of your other poems...
Very good!(8 out of 10)on my scale.This rating is very rare for me. I liked it mostly becuase you did what i tell most people here to do. Wrote with your heart! And truly you did it well for i fell into thine own blood(sorry i could not reist).
I will go see some of your other poems...