for The Second French Revolution7/7/2005 c1 
20Sonic Speed
I like the idea of this poem a whole lot. Perhaps, you could use some French words or phrases in your poem and go into more detail about the betrayl. This is great. Keep writing!
20Sonic SpeedI like the idea of this poem a whole lot. Perhaps, you could use some French words or phrases in your poem and go into more detail about the betrayl. This is great. Keep writing!
6/24/2005 c1 15Jacob Tanenbaum
I like it but you should include some French just to give it some flavor :)
15Jacob TanenbaumI like it but you should include some French just to give it some flavor :)