
9/30/2006 c1 scotti
This was one of your older works, but I still enjoyed it and the message you've portrayed here still rings true. Good Job! ~Scottie
This was one of your older works, but I still enjoyed it and the message you've portrayed here still rings true. Good Job! ~Scottie
7/23/2005 c1
19Kat-Renee Kittel
The progression of this poem as your eyes open to see the other person is so accurate... Got an email recently that said "Be kinder than necessary, for you never know what battles the other person is going thru..." -K

The progression of this poem as your eyes open to see the other person is so accurate... Got an email recently that said "Be kinder than necessary, for you never know what battles the other person is going thru..." -K
7/14/2005 c1
21WannaBWriter
fisrt impressions aren't what they seem huh? i was expecting this to be a more negative piece but the postitiveness took me by surprise. a good surprise that is. great write!

fisrt impressions aren't what they seem huh? i was expecting this to be a more negative piece but the postitiveness took me by surprise. a good surprise that is. great write!
6/24/2005 c1 The Postscript
I don't have very many classes with friends I know, but all my classes were with a girl who was popular and appeared to have a much better life than mine (good looks, etc.)I avoided her for fear whatever we talked about she would just go behind my back and say...but once she opened up to me, I realized I needed her to just be there to talk to me and listen to me, help me not feel alone anymore...she is part of the reason I did not fall into the trap of sucide a year ago. The regular student always looks at the jocks and popular students judging them for snobs because they first judged us as geeks or whatever else, but perhaps it's the other way around too. Thank you for this perspective, keep writing.
I don't have very many classes with friends I know, but all my classes were with a girl who was popular and appeared to have a much better life than mine (good looks, etc.)I avoided her for fear whatever we talked about she would just go behind my back and say...but once she opened up to me, I realized I needed her to just be there to talk to me and listen to me, help me not feel alone anymore...she is part of the reason I did not fall into the trap of sucide a year ago. The regular student always looks at the jocks and popular students judging them for snobs because they first judged us as geeks or whatever else, but perhaps it's the other way around too. Thank you for this perspective, keep writing.
6/23/2005 c1
50GirlNamedLiv
yeah why must ppl do that? cover themselves w/ images? its retarded. good job

yeah why must ppl do that? cover themselves w/ images? its retarded. good job