for Revenge7/10/2005 c1 
67nevermore the silent cry
awesome! i love this one! this shall be a favorite, definitely. so cool! the rhyming and timing is awesome, this was just so cool!
67nevermore the silent cryawesome! i love this one! this shall be a favorite, definitely. so cool! the rhyming and timing is awesome, this was just so cool!
6/26/2005 c1 21Ancamna
I really like this, it's full of emotion and shows how full this woman's mind is of revenge. I think that it would be better as a free-verse poem, rather than rhyme, because then you can make parts of it choppy or longer depending on the sense you want people to get from the poem. I tend to like/write free-verse more often, so maybe it's just personal preference.And to answer your question...I've never really been asked what I consider dance, but putting it that way I would say an athletic art form.
21AncamnaI really like this, it's full of emotion and shows how full this woman's mind is of revenge. I think that it would be better as a free-verse poem, rather than rhyme, because then you can make parts of it choppy or longer depending on the sense you want people to get from the poem. I tend to like/write free-verse more often, so maybe it's just personal preference.And to answer your question...I've never really been asked what I consider dance, but putting it that way I would say an athletic art form.