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6/28/2005 c1 3Cry Tears of Darkness
wasnt bad. was to the pt and true. nice writing!
6/28/2005 c1 19Trinny B
Well, when you said that we shouldn't read it, it made me want to even more. :-D And I'm glad! It's really good!

And point taken bout the song. Clearly I should pay a little more attention to music...*shifty glance*... lol.

The poem was good, and I liked it. It seemed almost the way a person thinks really.

Trins x
6/24/2005 c1 98sempre-e-por-sempre
i like the idea...although i agree that it could use some work...however, the basis is there...just expand upon it! keep writing!
6/24/2005 c1 41ChiquitoPanda
It doesn't suck, though I would agree that it could use a lot of work. However, it has a wonderful message, and I'd advise you to explore different styles of writing and detail to express it. You're on to something good, you just need to expand it. Nice work. ~TheCryingGame

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