for Fauns4/15/2006 c1 
21Lady Lucia
Wow, this was so pretty and creative. Kinda strange but I guess all dreams are, even so, it was interesting and like I said, beautiful.
The only wrong thing that I found with it was your word, "immerged". It's spelled with an "e" in front and with one "m": emerged.
No big.
Oh yeah, thanks for your reviews in my poems though I'm not really that much of a poet. Oh yeah, the reason why "Ballad of a Fallen Angel" is written so weird is because I was following the format of a ballad, hence the name but not all ballads have to be self named like that.
Thanks again and I'll be back for more of your work! ^-^
21Lady LuciaWow, this was so pretty and creative. Kinda strange but I guess all dreams are, even so, it was interesting and like I said, beautiful.
The only wrong thing that I found with it was your word, "immerged". It's spelled with an "e" in front and with one "m": emerged.
No big.
Oh yeah, thanks for your reviews in my poems though I'm not really that much of a poet. Oh yeah, the reason why "Ballad of a Fallen Angel" is written so weird is because I was following the format of a ballad, hence the name but not all ballads have to be self named like that.
Thanks again and I'll be back for more of your work! ^-^
6/26/2005 c1 28Ivy Shoelaces
You are lucky that you can recall your dreams so well. I write mine down, but can only remember snippets. Your writing is so specific and clear. Very good!
28Ivy ShoelacesYou are lucky that you can recall your dreams so well. I write mine down, but can only remember snippets. Your writing is so specific and clear. Very good!