for Who Is This?9/9/2005 c1 maxnotevoltage
Rescued by prince charming... "But who is this?" I love it - it's exciting and passionate, and gives a sense of nervousness and fear that we so often experience in our dreams, when we're running away.. You've truly got an amazing way with words! - J.max
Rescued by prince charming... "But who is this?" I love it - it's exciting and passionate, and gives a sense of nervousness and fear that we so often experience in our dreams, when we're running away.. You've truly got an amazing way with words! - J.max
6/26/2005 c1 
21Ancamna
I love this! The chopiness makes it sound just like a confusing dream, and by repeating certain things you emphasize them really well.
21AncamnaI love this! The chopiness makes it sound just like a confusing dream, and by repeating certain things you emphasize them really well.
6/25/2005 c1 Elizabeth Bilberry
dreams can mean many things. good idea to use them as the topic of your poetry.
it's an interesting piece of writing too. good use of line breaks.
EB
dreams can mean many things. good idea to use them as the topic of your poetry.
it's an interesting piece of writing too. good use of line breaks.
EB