
9/19/2005 c1 kloun doll
it's sad, real... the chorus is very lovely hopeful.
it's sad, real... the chorus is very lovely hopeful.
7/8/2005 c1
42missmichellini
wow powerful! beautifully written.
great job!
and thankies for the review! and no i suck! but thanks anyways! :P

wow powerful! beautifully written.
great job!
and thankies for the review! and no i suck! but thanks anyways! :P
7/7/2005 c1
6Nobody-n-Particular
For the Bridge, perhaps it can go like this:
"Don't forget about meEven though I wanderMaybe with this last road,You will believe like I do."
Hope it helps!

For the Bridge, perhaps it can go like this:
"Don't forget about meEven though I wanderMaybe with this last road,You will believe like I do."
Hope it helps!
7/4/2005 c1
28Panda-Bear-42
Beautiful! I love it! Very emotional very well written. Thanks for sharing!
bsb

Beautiful! I love it! Very emotional very well written. Thanks for sharing!
bsb