for To the Damned11/12/2005 c1 
107eraced
nice work. i really like your work. keep writing.
blood roses and a decaying corpse. ~ erAced ~
107eracednice work. i really like your work. keep writing.
blood roses and a decaying corpse. ~ erAced ~
11/3/2005 c1 21Shade2
Eh heh heh, this makes me warm and fuzzy inside (perhaps because I just read American Psycho, but whatever). Rhyme scheme was fine, not forced, which is brilliant. Ah, just though I'd let you know that To Kill a Child actually has a first chapter now . . . after about two years . . . *eh heh*
21Shade2Eh heh heh, this makes me warm and fuzzy inside (perhaps because I just read American Psycho, but whatever). Rhyme scheme was fine, not forced, which is brilliant. Ah, just though I'd let you know that To Kill a Child actually has a first chapter now . . . after about two years . . . *eh heh*
6/26/2005 c1 3Pont
0_0 ... remind me never to get on your bad side.
Really well done. I like the rhyming scheme, it gives it a kind of song-y feel. :hug: Keep it up!
~Ponteh out.
3Pont0_0 ... remind me never to get on your bad side.
Really well done. I like the rhyming scheme, it gives it a kind of song-y feel. :hug: Keep it up!
~Ponteh out.
6/25/2005 c1 17burnisbetter
This was a wonderful poem, with amazing, if gruesome, imagery.:)One small typo though. "Sitting beside your blood corpse..." Shouldn't that be "bloody corpse?" Or is it just me?
17burnisbetterThis was a wonderful poem, with amazing, if gruesome, imagery.:)One small typo though. "Sitting beside your blood corpse..." Shouldn't that be "bloody corpse?" Or is it just me?
6/25/2005 c1 11Cloud Burst
very vivid and theres this feeling of desperation in ur poem. awesome work
11Cloud Burstvery vivid and theres this feeling of desperation in ur poem. awesome work