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6/26/2005 c1 RoseSama35
The way that you ended this chapter could make it seem like this was simply a one-shot story. But the way you started made plenty of room for more story building. I'm confused, and at the same time, I'm interested.

I like the style that you are using, though I myself am a person that thrives on dialoug for a lot of a story. I noticed that you did have a few spelling errors here and there that you might want to check out, but the chapter was otherwise very good. Keep up the good work!Later Days!

~RoseSama35~ Love&Peace and world domination to your Queen!
6/25/2005 c1 2Willem
Hi. I am mormon, and i always thought some of the people i went to church with were robots. i like the writing style of this story, don't stop.

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